Blue-Eyes Crystal Dragon (My first card on the forum)

[sonicbomb]

 

Personally i like the card, Tell me watcha think! As said in the topic name this is my first card on the forum, I had a little bit of help from my freind with the OCG ect.

[BrenTenkage]

hmm this is very interesting, you either summon Tribute Fodder or use it to launch at a card...I like it 9/10

[B3lly N3rd]

i like it ...except..Cap Eyes and Crystal in the name o.o hehe ill laugh when someone says the summoning conditions are redicilous

-Monarch catylist

[-Athena-]

The picture looks cool and the name is okay. You should add a comma after you write "Once per turn" and what's up with the part when you say "release 1 monster"? And in the effect where you wrote once per turn, I found it weird to be reading it twice. But I liked the card.

 

8/10 :). Keep up the good work.

[FUNE]

Its a good card but in your decription you use wrong terms, 8/10

[ImmortalD]

Caps, Caps, Caps. You need Caps.

 

"Blue Eyes White Crystal Dragon" for the name;

""Blue Eyes White Dragon" + "The White Stone of Legend"" for the Summoning conditions.

 

Lore Fix: "Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Crystal Token" (Dragon/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your side of the field. (By removing from play 1 "Crystal Token"/By sending 1 "Crystal Token" to the graveyard) you can send one of your opponent's monsters to the graveyard."

 

Bold is your choice. Eiter one OR the other.

Pic is poor. and the effect is okay-ish. Summoning conditions are a bit iffy, but workable. ATK/DEF is the same as BEWD. You might need to change that. Level Stars are okay.

 

Type needs to be Dragon / Synchro / Effect. (Select "Effect" on the card maker when you're making an effect.)

 

4/10 - needs a fair bit of work.

[~Duo~]

By Tributing, not sending to Graveyard or Removing From Play. Tokens basically are removed from existence once they're removed from the field. All the Synchro Materials cannot be Set. Maybe like this:

 

Blue Eyes White Dragon + The White Stone of Legend + 1 non-Tuner Dragon-Type LIGHT monster

[B3lly N3rd]

Caps' date=' Caps, Caps. You need Caps.

 

"[i']Blue Eyes White Crystal Dragon[/i]" for the name;

""Blue Eyes White Dragon" + "The White Stone of Legend"" for the Summoning conditions.

 

Lore Fix: "Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Crystal Token" (Dragon/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your side of the field. (By removing from play 1 "Crystal Token"/By sending 1 "Crystal Token" to the graveyard) you can send one of your opponent's monsters to the graveyard."

 

Bold is your choice. Eiter one OR the other.

Pic is poor. and the effect is okay-ish. Summoning conditions are a bit iffy, but workable. ATK/DEF is the same as BEWD. You might need to change that. Level Stars are okay.

 

Type needs to be Dragon / Synchro / Effect. (Select "Effect" on the card maker when you're making an effect.)

 

4/10 - needs a fair bit of work.

 

no need to be mean with a 4/10 bro hes new so i have him 9 free points lol jk

[A.Prime]

No bad...but not great either...

you need a little help with OCG, nothing the crazy important....some words need Caps.

As i said at the top..No bad!! 8/10