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See this card and write wwhat you think about it please

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Summoned, your opponent discards their hand and sends all Dark monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game.

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Well... its a bit hard to summon ^^ and little OCG errors ^^

but how we will know it ATK?

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned, your opponent discards their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their Deck to the Graveyard. This card ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all DARK monsters in your Deck x 300. This card DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your Deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the duel."

I think thats the right ocg ^^

but I still dont get how we will know it ATK and DEF... :/

but the idea is nice ^^

8/10

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how can i improve it?

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' your opponent discards [b']card(s)[/b] their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points automatically drop to 0.

 

that is all

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Well I found it in the same place, but I had already posted my card in the thread Don't Fear the Reaper.

 

Even so I own nothing and you have all the rights to do what you want. I was just saying a fact and giving an idea, so don't think I'm here to make trouble.

 

I just want to say that if you agree we could merge our cards together

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how can i improve it?

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' your opponent discards [b']card(s)[/b] their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points automatically drop to 0.

 

that is all

 

Don't put "your life points automatically drop to zero". Put " Your Life Points decrease to 0"

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how can i improve it?

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' your opponent discards [b']card(s)[/b] their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points automatically drop to 0.

 

that is all

 

Don't put "your life points automatically drop to zero". Put " Your Life Points decrease to 0"

 

I was a little rusty there, but I guess that is correct.

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