Blackmetal Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 See this card and write wwhat you think about it please This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Summoned, your opponent discards their hand and sends all Dark monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Well... its a bit hard to summon ^^ and little OCG errors ^^but how we will know it ATK? "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned, your opponent discards their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their Deck to the Graveyard. This card ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all DARK monsters in your Deck x 300. This card DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your Deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the duel."I think thats the right ocg ^^but I still dont get how we will know it ATK and DEF... :/but the idea is nice ^^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Unique, a teenie bit OPed, with a few OCG errors. but good Job! 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 how can i improve it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 how can i improve it? This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' your opponent discards [b']card(s)[/b] their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points automatically drop to 0. that is all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 thanks ill try to performe that. ill give you a rep for your help ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Thanks! This is the first time I helped somebody out like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Anyone have more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 hmm well if you place a compulsory on your side of the field you can have it return unharmed anytime even when it is about to be destroyed so I guess that would be a bit of a problem. How about changing it to: When this card is removed from the field. instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ss2phil Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Hey! You're remaking my reaper! Even so your card looks good! I'm thinking that we could make our cards 1 if you want! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Sry ive never seen that card i just found the picture in deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ss2phil Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Well I found it in the same place, but I had already posted my card in the thread Don't Fear the Reaper. Even so I own nothing and you have all the rights to do what you want. I was just saying a fact and giving an idea, so don't think I'm here to make trouble. I just want to say that if you agree we could merge our cards together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Yeah i think thats a good idea but the problem is that im not here very often Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 not bad, ok, not brilliant :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 That is a little spam so plz tell why do u think so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Hey! You're remaking my reaper! Even so your card looks good! I'm thinking that we could make our cards 1 if you want! Try not spamming in another's thread. That means your cards too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Cabbage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 how can i improve it? This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' your opponent discards [b']card(s)[/b] their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points automatically drop to 0. that is all Don't put "your life points automatically drop to zero". Put " Your Life Points decrease to 0" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 how can i improve it? This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points are 500 or less. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' your opponent discards [b']card(s)[/b] their hand and sends all DARK monsters in their deck to the Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal to the combined Levels of all Dark monsters in your deck x 300. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all Fiend-Type monsters in your deck x 250. When this card is destroyed you lose the game. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points automatically drop to 0. that is all Don't put "your life points automatically drop to zero". Put " Your Life Points decrease to 0" I was a little rusty there, but I guess that is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Ok thanks ill try to performe that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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