Sai Pyke Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 My first Card. I decided to make it of Vegeta, as I've been watching DBZ lately. Hopefully it's not too bad. Lore: You may Only use the effect of this card on your Main Phase. Discard one monster card from your hand to the graveyard to increase the attack power of this card by 500 points. This card may not be used in the Battle Phase following the Main Phase that the effect of this card was used in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I like it. The picture is nice and seems original. The effect is sweet. Try and make a DBZ set of nine cards ! (DBZ-001 - 009) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sai Pyke Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Thanks man. I'll see what I can do about making more DBZ cards. It'll help me get more knowledge of OCG and whatnot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeik Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 OCG fix "Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by 500. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect." I think thats what you meant anyway. the last bit kinda threw me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by 500. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. I agree, this is mostly correct. But put a comma between turn and during. The card is okay, it can do better. 8/10 but a 9/10 after the OCG fixes. Good start, keep it up. This thread might help your OCG http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-141678.html. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 This thread might help your OCG http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-141678.html. the link doesn't work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 this is ok kinda OCG problems, dont really like the picture. like atk def and level. pretty good for a new comer. i say 5/10 view my dbz cards and see your mistakes dude http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-216285.htmlsee these and fix your mistakes also have these but the other link is better http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-216051.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 I don't see the point about Vegeta not being able to attack during that Battle Phase... it seems awfully underpowered... but then again, it ends up having 3000 ATK... I'm torn about it. Otherwise it's good. I'd see a decent dbz set from you i you made one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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