Different Zone Assault [DZAS][EN001-EN005]

[wero-vasto]

 

Yeah, I'm starting a new booster pack >.<! so here are the first 5 cards of the booster D:

 

It's name is Different Zone Assault and it introduces my new Archtype <_< the "Different Zone" Monsters (D.Z. Monsters)

 

 

[spoiler= DZAS-EN001]

 

 

 

When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can destroy up to 2 face-down cards on the field. For each card destroyed, Special Summon 1 Rock Token (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). This card cannot attack during the turn it is Normal or Special Summoned.

 

 

[spoiler= DZAS-EN002]

 

 

 

If this card battles with a monster in the same column as this card, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. When a monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play and Special Summon this card from your Graveyard in the same Monster Card Zone of the destroyed monster.

 

 

[spoiler= DZAS-EN003]

 

 

 

You can Tribute this card to destroy all cards in this column.

 

 

[spoiler= DZAS-EN004]

 

 

 

When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can return up to 2 cards on the field to the owner's hand. For each card returned, that card's controller discards 1 card. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Normal or Special Summoned.

 

 

[spoiler= DZAS-EN005]

 

 

 

Select 1 Spellcaster-Type monster you control. The selected monster is treated as "Dark Magician" while it's face-up on the field. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "Dark Magician" monster from your Deck or Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

Enjoy it ;D<3

 

 

Cookiez if you like =3

 

 

EDIT: Fix'd some errors!

 

 

Img. Credit for the monsters: HP Doom

 

Img. Credit for the Spell: Jazin Kay

 

[wero-vasto]

ughh... BUMP

[iCherry]

[spoiler=Comments on each one.]@Monarchs: Oh god, we're going to get new types of Monarchs from your cards and Dirg, aren't we?

 

@Titus: Mobius' effect but restricted to face-downs and you get rewarded with tokens instead? Well, at least you get tokens for materials. And, it's a better Granmarg, only it can set off Starlight. ;_;

 

@DZ Assailant: Kinda confused here. "When a monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play and Special Summon this card in the same Monster Card Zone of the destroyed monster.". You can Special Summon this in another column while it's on the field? A ruling allows that? o_O

 

@DZ Harpie: LolColumnExplosion

 

@Gritus: BOUNCING IS

 

@Optical Illusion: I like this one. Name Change, then SS the real thing.

 

 

 

I like them all Wero. Nice job.

[Yankee]

Card 1: Op'd, Normal or Special...No, it's "When this card is Summoned", when you mean both...

Card 2: If it's destroyed immediately, you don't need to add the "flipped face up" part. Not a bad card.

 

Card 3: OCG feels off. Not...bad..?

Card 4: "When this card is Summoned", What is "reeturned"..? Insanely OP'd.

Card 5: Random...not bad, sorta op'd...

[M.B X]

Wow! great booster buddy. I like them all, but i really love DZ Harpie!

90% chance to go thru the 1st round of my MSE contest.

[wero-vasto]

[spoiler=Comments on each one.]@Monarchs: Oh god' date=' we're going to get new types of Monarchs from your cards and Dirg, aren't we?

 

@Titus: Mobius' effect but restricted to face-downs and you get rewarded with tokens instead? Well, at least you get tokens for materials. And, it's a better Granmarg, only it can set off Starlight. ;_; [b']If it set off Starlight then it could be a little OPed D:[/b]

 

@DZ Assailant: Kinda confused here. "When a monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play and Special Summon this card in the same Monster Card Zone of the destroyed monster.". You can Special Summon this in another column while it's on the field? A ruling allows that? o_O Lolz my errors is from the Graveyard

 

@DZ Harpie: LolColumnExplosion one of my own favorite cards =D

 

@Gritus: BOUNCING IS <3

 

@Optical Illusion: I like this one. Name Change, then SS the real thing.

 

 

open this^

I like them all Wero. Nice job. <3 thanks Zeo! =D

 

Card 1: Op'd' date=' Normal or Special...No, it's "When this card is Summoned", when you mean both... [b']No, cuz there's Flip too D:[/b]

Card 2: If it's destroyed immediately, you don't need to add the "flipped face up" part. Not a bad card. I take the text from Mystic Swordsman D: maybe true!

 

Card 3: OCG feels off. Not...bad..? Lolz I take the OCG from Blasting Fuse (thought that's the name) and then modify it for this card purpose D:

Card 4: "When this card is Summoned", What is "reeturned"..? Insanely OP'd. Typo D: I should remove 1 e >

Card 5: Random...not bad, sorta op'd...

Thanks Lusty ;D

 

Wow! great booster buddy. I like them all' date=' but i really love DZ Harpie!

90% chance to go thru the 1st round of my MSE contest.

[b']Thanks buddy

 

[spoiler= Promise is Promise D: Thanks ^^]

 

[wero-vasto]

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[wero-vasto]

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[wero-vasto]

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[wero-vasto]

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[~Shin~]

1-since that it only destroy face-dawn it is balance but a token for each card maybe too much 6.5/10.

2-nice, but what will happen if that zone have another monster ?! 8/10.

3- a bit OP. "in this column" which column ?! 6.9/10.

4-no thing is new but still good 6.2/10.

5-I do not see the point or the drawback in this card !!

[wero-vasto]

1-since that it only destroy face-dawn it is balance but a token for each card maybe too much 6.5/10. Really? Oh well' date=' thanks[/b']

2-nice, but what will happen if that zone have another monster ?! 8/10. I don't get what you say cuz that zone would be empty -.-

3- a bit OP. "in this column" which column ?! 6.9/10. See Blasting Fuse and then we talk

4-no thing is new but still good 6.2/10. Thanks

5-I do not see the point or the drawback in this card !! Does it need for supporting a Vanilla? and just 1 Effect Monster?

 

Thanks

[~Shin~]

2-I mean that a monster can be specisl summon into that zone before you special summon your monster.. like if you used "Call of the Haunted" and the summoned monster was placed into that zone since you can not choic any zone you like or can you ?! I am not sure.

3-"Blasting Fuse" effect say "this column" because it said "this card's column" but you card said nothing.

5- still it did not get into my head.

[wero-vasto]

2-I mean that a monster can be specisl summon into that zone before you special summon your monster.. like if you used "Call of the Haunted" and the summoned monster was placed into that zone since you can not choic any zone you like or can you ?! I am not sure. As far as I know you can Special Summon the monster wherever you want (your side) but' date=' if that occurs then it can't be Summoned cuz the Zone is occupied.[/b']

3-"Blasting Fuse" effect say "this column" because it said "this card's column" but you card said nothing. Then my cards says "this column" cuz it is in a column when activating the effect <_<

5- still it did not get into my head. "Dark Magician" support ask for him in the field, with this you can activate "Dark Magic Attack", etc... without having "Dark Magician" on the field, also you can Tribute your monster to Summon "Dark Eradicator Warlock" adn you don't have to loose the original "Dark Magician". Then the thing get better, cuz you can Special Summon the original "Dark Magician".

[~Shin~]

3-no it dose not "this" must refer to a word in the sentence.

5-ohh.. then when you lose the selected monster you summon the realy one..OP.

[Max Darkness]

Titus: I don't like addition to the "Monarch" effect, since it's a double-positive. There is no real negative to the effect. Sure you can't attack, but you've cleared the way for your other monsters and given them Tribute fodder. It's as broken as "Dirg".

 

D.Z. Assailant: Coupled with "Senet Switch", you could easily pick off your opponent's most powerful monsters. If you're going to have the auto-destruction effect, scrap the second effect. All cards which don't have restrictive summoning conditions that auto-destruct another card have only that effect.

 

D.Z. Harpie: 'You can Tribute this card to destroy all cards in this card's column.' Reduce the ATK and DEF to 1600 and 1200 or so.

 

Gritus: Again, double-positive. You Summon this, return 2 cards and force your opponent to get rid of two. In essence, your opponent loses four cards. Very, very overpowered.

 

Optical Illusion: You should probably make it so you have to Tribute the selected monster to Special Summon the "Dark Magician".

 

 

 

Most are overpowered or otherwise unbalanced. The original "Monarchs" are balanced, despite their powerful effects, since they were one-time shots with one good effect. Your new "Monarchs" add an additional effect, which frankly, wrecks them.

[Xayax]

OCG is off. there a little unrealistic but other then that 6/10

[wero-vasto]

3-no it dose not "this" must refer to a word in the sentence. When the effect activates the card's still on the field' date=' so is this card's column so i'll add it...[/b']

5-ohh.. then when you lose the selected monster you summon the realy one..OP. Again, when does a Vanilla is OPed?

 

Titus: I don't like addition to the "Monarch" effect' date=' since it's a double-positive. There is no real negative to the effect. Sure you can't attack, but you've cleared the way for your other monsters and given them Tribute fodder. It's as broken as "Dirg".[b']Tricky effect is Tricky, If I'm gonna destroy Set Spell or Trap your opponent can activate it <_< now that the card isn't face-down the effect won't destroy it and the no token <_< Tricky effect is Tricky

 

D.Z. Assailant: Coupled with "Senet Switch", you could easily pick off your opponent's most powerful monsters. If you're going to have the auto-destruction effect, scrap the second effect. All cards which don't have restrictive summoning conditions that auto-destruct another card have only that effect.

 

D.Z. Harpie: 'You can Tribute this card to destroy all cards in this card's column.' Reduce the ATK and DEF to 1600 and 1200 or so. Gonna fix that

 

Gritus: Again, double-positive. You Summon this, return 2 cards and force your opponent to get rid of two. In essence, your opponent loses four cards. Very, very overpowered. actually is a -2 for your opponent only, but it gives field control...

 

Optical Illusion: You should probably make it so you have to Tribute the selected monster to Special Summon the "Dark Magician". Naah... i think it isn't OPed <_< it would loose the essence of the card if I make that you need to Tribute it D:

 

 

 

Most are overpowered or otherwise unbalanced. The original "Monarchs" are balanced, despite their powerful effects, since they were one-time shots with one good effect. Your new "Monarchs" add an additional effect, which frankly, wrecks them. The only Good Monarchs are Zaborg, Raiza, Mobius & Caius... thought Zaborg still is dangerous <_< cuz it can destroy itself D: leaving Mobius, Raiza & Caius... so I'm gonna help them <_<

 

OCG is off.Then fix it <_< if not don't say is off... there a little unrealistic but other then that 6/10 unrealistic? explain...

 

everything else would be take in consideration... ^^

[wero-vasto]

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[dylantop]

some are good but some are not but nice job! over all 8/10

[wero-vasto]

some are good but some are not but nice job! over all 8/10

 

thanks.... thought it would be better if you explain what is not good <_<

[whocaresrmd]

worst ocg ever im neggging u and poor pics2/10

[Skirts]

I like them. The OCG is a bit off. OP'd. But other than that. I like the idea's etc. 5/10

[wero-vasto]

worst ocg ever im neggging u and poor pics2/10

 

WORST COMMENT EVER <_< I'm negging u for neggin me for bad OCG <_< that's not a valid reason <_<

If you think that my OCG is bad then fix it <_< if not then GTFO <_<

and about the pics <_< that's not a reason for a 2 <_<

then again useless comment is useless

 

I like them. The OCG is a bit off. OP'd. But other than that. I like the idea's etc. 5/10

 

OCG off? Then fix it <_<

If you can't then don't say it <_<

Explain me how are they OPed <_< and I accept it :)

[wero-vasto]

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