TheAlpha Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 use more spaces and paragraphs. the story itself seemed to lack context' date=' and you need to either upload more chapters or clear up this matter.[/quote'] Uhmmm... Well I just posted this chapter yesterday so I don't plan to add anymore until this evening... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Well, you asked me to take a look at it... and it's impossible to write a Weather Report on something that's not fiction. That said, it's pretty nice how your outlook on life shows through this, and... um... there's nothing I can say. It's nice, it's full of thought, and... that's pretty much it. I can't add anything to the comments already posted. It's not the best thing ever, but it's part of the better, readable portion of crappy crap on this forum. I gots no comments, basically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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