chedbonlahor Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 I've had this one for a while and ive never posted it, tell me what you think: Technology coarses through the veins of this superhuman android. The result of which is the ultimate weapon of combat, fuelled by the quintessential balance of man and machine. Master chief is deployed and ready for duty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjakaras1234 Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 100000000000000/10000000000000000000 Good MAn and Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Change the type into Warrior, and name it Spartan: Master Chief. so people don't get on your case for Fake Types or...yeah you can put in the type box Warrior / Spartan So its a Subtype. You got good ideas trust me on this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince of Tennis Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Only thing you can rate Vanilla's on are Pic and Backstory, I like both 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supersmashbrawl Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 At least your somebody that doesn't give such short description Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 How is he an android when he started out as a human? Also, you have grammar errors; major issue being a fragment (I'm such a grammar freak, sorry xD) "Technology coarses through the veins of this biologically enhanced human. He is the perfect soldier; the ultimate weapon of combat fueled by the quintessential balance of man and machine. Master chief is deployed and ready for duty." Epic description. Big words actually used correctly (or is it appropriate jargon?) plus good pic with an awesome background equals a rate of: 9.5/10Finally a decent Master Chief Vanilla. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 How is he an android when he started out as a human? Also' date=' you have grammar errors; major issue being a fragment (I'm such a grammar freak, sorry xD) "Technology coarses through the veins of this biologically enhanced human. He is the perfect soldier; the ultimate weapon of combat fueled by the quintessential balance of man and machine. Master chief is deployed and ready for duty." Epic description. Big words actually used correctly (or is it appropriate jargon?) plus good pic with an awesome background equals a rate of: 9.5/10Finally a decent Master Chief Vanilla.[/quote'] The thing about master chief is that he was a human but when he puts on the suit he becomes one with the machine, the superhuman bit is all the injections and genetic modification he gets before he puts it on. I'm glad you like it i am striving to become a vanilla expert!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
インフェルニティ・ミラージュ Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Nice cards dude! A lot of people don't like vanilla cards, but even one of those people would have to like them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosInfinity Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 "Android" means a humanoid robot, which Master Chief is not. I think the term you're looking for is "cyborg", a human with some cybernetic parts. Make sure you do your research before making a 'vanilla'.The second word should be "courses". "Coarse" is an adjective, not a verb; it means "rough".The second sentence has poor grammar, yeah.Pic's quite good.I like the little touches like the set no. and his "Earth" Attribute. CND0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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