Clair Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 [align=center]I'm making a set. *sardonic clapping* I feel it's unique, but I'll leave it up to you to decide. ^^ Say hello to a new world defender! [spoiler=[b]Support[/b]] Effect: "Captain Justice" cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving "Captain Justice". Effect: This card can only be equipped to a "Captain Justice" you control. If the equipped monster battles a monster with a higher Level, the equipped monster gains 500 ATK x the difference in Levels (during that battle only). When the equipped monster is removed from the field, you can return it to the top of your Deck to add this card to your hand. Effect: Equip this card only to a "Captain Justice" you control. When the equipped monster battles, place 1 Burning Counter on 1 of your opponent's monsters. (max. 1 per monster) A monster with a Burning Counter loses ATK equal to its Level x100. Effect: You can discard this card from your hand to add 1 "Justi-Break" or "Justice" card from your Deck to your hand. Effect: Activate this card only when you control no monsters and your opponent declares an attack. End the Battle Phase and Special Summon 1 "Captain Justice" from your Deck or Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. Rate/Hate/Love. <3[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 These are great. A lot of cards are reminding me of my old Galaxy Archetype...9/10 for awesome cards, and an extra +3.687 for nostalgia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Needs more Equips. The equips should have effects at the beginning like: "You can discard this card to add 1 "Captain FalconJustice" from your Deck to your hand." So that, in case you don't have him in your hand, you're not dead. But cool start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Reminds me a lot of Ojamas. This set has a lot of potential, but I have yet to see something I could make a deck out of. Keep doing what your doing and work on your OCG a little and this could be fantastic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Minor rephrasing, but great support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Why don't you make him Tuner? D: then make some Synchroes that ask him as a Tuner <_< and that Synchroes could be another armor of the Captain? OT:I agree with X-L I like the story :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 I love the cards. There isn't much I can really say, since there are no errors I can see. I'll be sure to keep an eye on this set for when more cards roll around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 ...Anyone else notice when...Needs more Equips. The equips should have effects at the beginning like: "You can discard this card to add 1 "Captain FalconJustice" from your Deck to your hand."Anyone else notice CAPTAIN FALCON? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 "This dynamo dispatches enemies with ease." *looks at ATK* I lol'd so hard at that. This card would have a ton of potential as a Tuner.Finally, a decent Vanilla with awesome support. I haven't seen that in a while.Pics are perfect for the cards.OCG looks fine IMO. 10/10 because you gave Vanillas purpose again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 Thank you all. I'll take your suggestions into account. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 One bump. More support a-coming~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I dig this. And I say give him Synchroes, but don't make him a Tuner. I don't want anyone to run Captain Justice in anything but a Captain Justice Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 need more monsters 4 real 5.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Make this a Machine-Type and you got yourself a baws awesome deck ;D. GO FOR IT. Btw, the Justi-Break search card would be epic in a vanilla deck. Just sayi' you know ;D. Support is super smexy. I could make an awesome deck with this, if it was Machine-Type. Machine-Type pwetty pwease :3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 i like machines, but he definatly looks like a warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 The monster themselves aren't great at first, but their support was perfect. They were balanced as with their OCG. And unique as well! 10/10. Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 you make level one vanilla weaklings look good! these cards would be a little broken if they weren't equip spells that are the only thing making this monster good. that fact that a heavy storm can leave him defenseless perfectly balances his awesomeness. the second monster and the trap are great also, and fit perfectly in the Captain Justice-centric theme. 9.5/10, because nothing is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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