PRETTY SENSHI SAILOR MOON CARDS:) ~NEW!!!~ 53 CARDS IN TOTAL...I THINK...COMMENT:)

[solidad]

[align=center]these are all sailor moon anime series cards it took me a really looooooong time to make them(and yes i do have a lot of time on my hands) so plz leave good comments. THANK YOU!!!:)

NOTES

* Senshi Attack - Sabao Spray is actually japanese name for mercury bubbles

* all names are taken from the original anime not the dub

* i don't the sailor moon franchise (copyright infragment)

*images are from deviantart.com, images.google, and wikimoon.org

* also i know that missing a whole bunch of characters(tuxedo mask, the starlights, etc.) but don"t worry i'll make them just let me know what characters you want me to add

 

[spoiler= [color=#FFA500]The Monsters[/color]]

 

[spoiler= [color=#32CD32]Spell Cards[/color]]

 

[spoiler= [color=#C71585]Trap cards[/color]]

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[poopybuttoxes]

Ya did good kid.... ya did good.....

 

haha 9/10 Your OCG is getting better. Remember that when dealing with numbers its always numerical (123 not one two three), and card after spell and trap card is capitalized (Spell and Trap Card). They're cool though.

[solidad]

Thanks:)

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i just hope other people can rate and comment:)

[Shizuku Oikawa]

lol, I think you repeated a Trap Card

OCG could use a little Tuning

Pics could be a slight better

8/10

[solidad]

well i fixed most one the problems and now i'm working on the rest:)

[bloorocksDotD]

FAILED

[NeosWiseman]

The pics are kinda low quality. The OCG is fine, except for things like that

summon/summoned - should be capitalized

one=1

choose - usually we use select instead

Monster/ Spell/ Trap Card

Don't put points after ATK/DEF

points damage= either points of damage or just damage

 

I can say it's quite a nice set! Is it finished?

 

Anyway, I'll rate it 8/10

Nicely done! ^^

[solidad]

FAILED

 

how is did i fail, it took me forever to make these cards:(

[Astro Dude]

Sweet cards. Keep up the good work.

[solidad]

@TDI Owen: thanks :) it took me like 2 hours just to make them ALL

[Saturn of Elemia]

I like the images you used. (Would you tell me where you got the images for the Crystal Change Wands? I don't have the ones for Uranus, Neptune, Pluto, or Saturn - and they would help if I decide to remake my Sailor Moon set one day).

 

Personally, not too fond of the idea that the Outer Senshi are the same strength as the Inner Senshi. Effects are basic, but they work - and work well.

 

I'll give these 8/10. 8)

[solidad]

i got the images from deviantART.com

here's the link

http://karolhofman.deviantart.com/gallery/

[Saturn of Elemia]

i got the images from deviantART.com

here's the link

http://karolhofman.deviantart.com/gallery/

 

Thanks a bunch, dude. 8)

[solidad]

your welcome i hope that website helped:)

[Flinsbon]

First off, I'd like to say Sailor Moon ftw (see my sig), though I like the dub and haven't really watched any subbed episodes of the anime. However, I did watch all of the live-action show and I read about stuff on wikimoon, so I'm familiar with the differences between the Japanese and English shows.

 

Now on to your cards. I'd give them an 8/10, but only because the effects need to be fixed for OCG and other stuff. I can't fix every effect for you, but I see some trends that I can address.

 

1. All numbers should be numerically written rather than spelled out. One should be 1, two is 2, etc.

 

2. "As long as this card remains face up" and "until this card is destroyed" on the Outer Senshi cards are redundant and can be removed because the core effects are only active while they are face-up on the field, anyway (as stated by the rules of the game).

 

3. Cosmic Moon, Crisis Moon, and Eternal Moon all address their respective spell cards as "Sailor Magic Item - ..." but the spell cards' names are "Senshi Magic Item - ..."

 

4. In some places, words are simply missing completely.

 

There are more errors, but you should try to find them yourself. If you have any more questions, though, just ask!

[Neo-R.]

They are quite good friend, the only thing I can say is that you can make the names more simple.