Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Here are my 3 cards. If you don't mind rating and helping with my OCG errors...and telling me what to improve on, I'd be glad! I'm always open for suggestions. Thanks! :) Thank you lots! EDIT: They were updated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Balboa & Bula Bula are UPed... Alinta is good... but last effect <_< a little useless cuz there's no person that would like to combine Fairies with Pyros yet D:and there's better burn effects <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Well, I made Balboa and Bula Bula in order to power them up basically. Normally these would fit into a God-Structured Deck, so it would be somewhat okay. Hows my OCG?BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 yeah I can see that but, out of that <_< until I see a full God Set this card's are somehow UPed... about the OCG <_< I not always comment about it but now that you've asked:FAIRY should be Fairy-Typesummoned should be Summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 be a bit more specific on your god of fire. other than that, you get a solid: OMG/ wheres the printer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylantop Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 some ocg the god of fire is a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 some ocg the god of fire is a bit what?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Sasuke Uchiha:. Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 There all realy good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Thanks everybody! And I just updated their pics and graphics so they should be even better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 The OCG needs a bit of work, but it would be easier to fix if you posted the lores. Still, The Goddess of Snakes and of Love should each read: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand? Graveyard?) when you control 1 "Alinta - God of Fire". Alinta should read: This card gains 500 ATK for each "Balboa - Goddess of Snakes" and each "Bula Bula - Goddess of Love" on the field. You can send 1 Fairy-Type monster (you control? on the field?) to the Graveyard to inflict 500 damage to your opponent. On both effects, the bold sections in parentheses indicate a choice you need to make for your effect. For the two smaller Goddesses, you probably just meant to Special Summon from the hand, although you could add from the Graveyard, as well - the only problem there is that would make this an automatic OTK. On the Alinta, you could give him authority to pop a Fairy on either side of the field, which would make him more interesting, and more worth it, IMO. Just a thought. Oh, one last thing, I think your pictures are either too low resolution, or too high resolution. (They look a bit like a hi-rez picture crammed into a small space). I don't really have a suggestion for that, but I just thought you should be aware. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Thanks a lot! I actually changed the pictures and got them holoed. They look a lot better. I'm very happy with your suggestions! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xayax Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 A little underpowered for so called god cards if you ask me. THen again alinta would be 4200. but the other gods would be easy targets so he would go backdown to 3200. Hmmm, i give cards 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 See, these are only three of them. There are supposed to be 20, with my Yin Yang one being the most powerful. I have yet to put it up though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kylet567 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 I don't like the idea of one of the gods feeding off of the godessess. If they are gods, each of them should have their own indavidually powerful effects, as well as powering eachother up. Anyways, I like the fire one, but his picture could look a bit more menacing. It's the only one that really deserves to be considered a god. Decent group of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Well thanks! I understand, and I made these for a contest. I'll post the updated versions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Bumpz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 the first is good but the second two, are really kind of up'ed.....even for supporting the first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 i agree w/ wind ninja too up'd for 2nd and 3rd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I made them for a contest where I had to make two underpowered cards that powered up a powerful one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 ummm is balboa really a goddess? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkatsukiPride! Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I suggest a moon god. That would be cool. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liamchappell97 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I like these cards. Also a moon god would be cool. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Well, my other plans are Rat, Earth, Family, Sun, Anger, Wood, Metal, Underdog, Harvest, Luck, Race, Strength, Happiness, Animal, Wind, Water, and Opposites. That's it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sliver King Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I think The first one is good, the rest are mehish. I think the art is great on all of them. It's Alinta and his harem that powers him up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Thanks! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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