A War Torn Special (Need Comments)

[Nathanael D. Striker]

[align=center][spoiler=Shape Changing Earth]

Image Credit goes to Wanderley

[spoiler=Lore]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field as a Normal Monster, you can Normal Summon it again to have it treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

This card gains DEF equal to half of this cards original ATK.

While this card is face-up on the field as an Effect Monster, you can Normal Summon it again to gain this effect:

This card cannot be destroyed by monsters with an ATK of 2300 or more.

 

[spoiler=Disclamer]This card is a new type of Gemini Summoning. It can be confusing at times, but it is worth it in the end.

 

 

[spoiler=Earth Transformation]

Image Credit goes to HP Doom

[spoiler=Lore]Equip only to "Shape-Changing Earth". The equipped monster gains 200 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster is destroyed and this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Mother Earth" in Attack Position from your hand or Deck.

 

 

[spoiler=Mother Earth]

Image Credit goes to HP Doom

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned with the effect of "Earth Transformation". All monsters on the field are treated as EARTH monsters. When this card attacks, if its ATK is lower than the ATK of the attack target, reduce the ATK of your opponent's monster by 100 for each EARTH monster on your opponent's field during damage calculation only. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Shape Changing Earth" from your Graveyard in Attack Position.

 

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I recently put these into a contest, but I want to see what you all think about them. CnC is appreciated.

 

I can't stand how people say that my pics are overused. They are that way since they are pics from YCM Archives.

[Survivor]

9.9257245632Q53762/10

 

Because I was feeling jokey. Great cards!

[Phantom M.C.]

what can i say....great cards, 8/10

the first 2 pics are overused, but idk

[Nathanael D. Striker]

Thank you everyone.

 

EDIT: More comments please!

[Survivor]

I think that the reason that they're overused is that they both come from Wanderley's archives.

[Nathanael D. Striker]

My first case of Credit Mix up. Changing now.

[legendhiro]

technically the first one should specify that its third summoning can only be used once, as without such an addition, this mechanic on other cards could be abused. even if you don't plan to make more cards using this mechanic, you need to think like a card creator for konami who works with people who will.

 

(example: imagine that it said: While this card is face-up on the field as an Effect Monster, you can Normal Summon it again to gain this effect:

Double the ATK of this card.

 

or: While this card is face-up on the field as an Effect Monster, you can Normal Summon it again to gain this effect:

Once per turn you card destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.)

 

the other two cards are truly great, and despite this one flaw, the first is great as well.

 

9/10, because nothing is perfect.

[dylantop]

awesome card

9.999999999999999999999999999/10

[legendhiro]

awesome card

9.999999999999999999999999999/10

 

one: too many 9's. makes you look noobish.

 

two: the rules call for more of a comment than "awesome card" or the like.

 

three: there is more than one card there ya know ;)

[Nathanael D. Striker]

Thank you for your comments. I plan to make more.

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

Interesting double Gemini power

the other 2 are okay thats all i can really think of saying about these >.>

7.9035201/10 (i rate specifically)

[BulletMan]

I'm going to give you my opinion:

 

1st card: okay art, cool name, yeah all of that is okay. But it's level 5 with 1800 ATK. So this must be balanced by its effect. Now it's gemini, so the Effect must give you something really good! If you summon it again...he gains 900 DEF...meh. But you can Normal Summon him next turn to give him a monster protection effect against monsters with 2300 ATK or more, in means of battle or effects.

 

To tell the truth...that is VERY weak. I can still use my magic and traps and my less powerful monster to destroy him. And monsters more powerful will just go over him and deal a little bit of damage.

 

The equip has a weak ATK and DEF gain...I was hoping for a little more at least. Like 500 ATK. Of course, if the equiped monster goes, then you can get a Mother Earth out. Though the opponent will think about that first and destroy the equip first, or plan on Mothers coming, so there's a weak spot.

 

She's decent ATK, okay effect. So everything becomes EARTH...okay. I guess that could screw up Honest. Then if a monster with more ATK attacks, you can weaken it by 100 and yeah...Then if she goes, you get Changing Earth back...in attack position.

 

I didn't like these to well. They are meh at best even.

 

1st card: 6/10

2nd card: I can't give it a rating, it just depends on Changing Earth there.

3rd card: 6.5/10 I was expecting out of 2 quite weak cards a much more powerful thing to come out. But I was wrong. :/

 

I was expecting better.

[legendhiro]

somehow i missed that it was level five :/ not as good as i thought at first. still not bad, especially since you can always surprise your opponent by destroyed the equipped SCE yourself.

 

but a level five with only 1800 does lower my original rating by one.

 

looking forward to more cards and maybe mother earth support cards.

[Nathanael D. Striker]

Thank you to all. I should have a card by tomorrow.

[windninja96]

first pic is too overused

[Nathanael D. Striker]

first pic is too overused

 

Aren't all Archive pics overused?

[Βyakuya]

It seems you did well! Nice job! 9.8/10

[Nathanael D. Striker]

So close to a 10/10 only .2 away on that one.