Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Useful and constructive feedback is appreciated. Enjoy :D [align=center]Lore:Equip this card to a non-DARK monster in face-up Attack Position you control. The equipped monster must remain in Attack Position and cannot declare an attack, its effect is negated. The equipped monster is also treated as Fiend-Type and DARK. Increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 100 during each of your End Phases until the 5th End Phase after this card was equipped. During your End Phase after the 5th, activate one of the following effects:• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and add half the equipped monster's ATK and DEF to a DARK monster's ATK and DEF.• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and Special Summon a DARK monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to or less than the equipped monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I love it. Great idea, and good picture. I don't see any OCG errors. I think any DARK lover would want this in there deck with the right cards. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I love it. Great idea' date=' and good picture. I don't see any OCG errors. I think any DARK lover would want this in there deck with the right cards. 10/10[/quote'] thx :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarpieLadyFan2496 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 AWESOME!!! Have you seen my dark Trap Card? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-217862.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 AWESOME!!! Have you seen my dark Trap Card? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-217862.html yes, and thx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 10/10 for Originality8/10 for UsabilityI can't see any OCG errors offhand, nice job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 10/10 for Originality8/10 for UsabilityI can't see any OCG errors offhand' date=' nice job man.[/quote'] thx, :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 [spoiler=FIX]"Equip this card to a face-up Attack Position non-DARK monster you control. The equipped monster effect is negated and it cannot change Position or declare an attack. The equipped monster is also treated as a Dark Fiend-Type monster. During your End Phase, for 5 turns, increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 100. Then activate one of the following effects:• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and increase a DARK monster you control ATK by half the equipped monster's ATK.• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and Special Summon a DARK monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to or less than the equipped monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." IF you want to summon more then just 1 monster "DARK monsters whose Total Level" ....ahhh...long... 6.5/10.all good exepet that the monster still have its attribute and type and the last effect if it allows you to summon more then 1 monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel killer315 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 great card nice idea that card could be very useful!9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 [spoiler= Wrong FIX]"Equip this card to a face-up Attack Position non-DARK monster you control. The equipped monster effect is negated and it cannot change Position or declare an attack. The equipped monster is also treated as a Dark Fiend-Type monster. During your End Phase' date=' for 5 turns, increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 100. Then activate one of the following effects:• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and increase a DARK monster you control ATK by half the equipped monster's ATK.• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and Special Summon a DARK monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to or less than the equipped monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." IF you want to summon more then just 1 monster "DARK monsters whose Total Level" ....ahhh...long... 6.5/10.all good exepet that the monster still have its attribute and type and the last effect if it allows you to summon more then 1 monster.[/quote'] Don't pay attention to this guys supposed "FIX". It's all wrong. :/ Anyways, the card is too overcomplicated. You don't have to make long effects to make "support" cards for Attributes/Archtypes/etc. etc. 10/10 for Originality8/10 for UsabilityI can't see any OCG errors offhand' date=' nice job man.[/quote'] Lolololololololol. How is this card original? It's just a bunch of effects crammed into 1 card. Original, eh? It might be usable, sure, but it's just, eh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 great card nice idea that card could be very useful!9.9/10 thx :) [spoiler= Wrong FIX]"Equip this card to a face-up Attack Position non-DARK monster you control. The equipped monster effect is negated and it cannot change Position or declare an attack. The equipped monster is also treated as a Dark Fiend-Type monster. During your End Phase' date=' for 5 turns, increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 100. Then activate one of the following effects:• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and increase a DARK monster you control ATK by half the equipped monster's ATK.• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and Special Summon a DARK monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to or less than the equipped monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." IF you want to summon more then just 1 monster "DARK monsters whose Total Level" ....ahhh...long... 6.5/10.all good exepet that the monster still have its attribute and type and the last effect if it allows you to summon more then 1 monster.[/quote'] Don't pay attention to this guys supposed "FIX". It's all wrong. :/ Anyways, the card is too overcomplicated. You don't have to make long effects to make "support" cards for Attributes/Archtypes/etc. etc. 10/10 for Originality8/10 for UsabilityI can't see any OCG errors offhand' date=' nice job man.[/quote'] Lolololololololol. How is this card original? It's just a bunch of effects crammed into 1 card. Original, eh? It might be usable, sure, but it's just, eh... seriously, people have their own thoughts. and this is my card, i can make it complicated if i want to. is there something wrong with that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 2.0 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Right before you list the 2 effects at the end, fix the ocg. Its repetitive and dull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Right before you list the 2 effects at the end' date=' fix the ocg. Its repetitive and dull.[/quote'] how do you suppose i fix it? i've no idea. and is the card repetitive and dull, or only that sentence? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john3 Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 lol is this for teh contest? if so zeems liek gud dark support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 lol is this for teh contest? if so zeems liek gud dark support it wasn't supposed to be for the contest, but since any card works i just posted it. :) and yes, as the title says, its a DARK suppport and could you rate my card plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john3 Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 it's a little UPed, so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 it's a little UPed' date=' so 8/10[/quote'] really? could you specify how? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john3 Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 the part before the little bullets is kind of... unhelpful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 is it this part: During your End Phase after the 5th, activate one of the following effects: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john3 Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 somewhat i suppose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 so, is it not phrased right? i really don't know any other way to write it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 [spoiler= Wrong FIX]"Equip this card to a face-up Attack Position non-DARK monster you control. The equipped monster effect is negated and it cannot change Position or declare an attack. The equipped monster is also treated as a Dark Fiend-Type monster. During your End Phase' date=' for 5 turns, increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 100. Then activate one of the following effects:• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and increase a DARK monster you control ATK by half the equipped monster's ATK.• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and Special Summon a DARK monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to or less than the equipped monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." IF you want to summon more then just 1 monster "DARK monsters whose Total Level" ....ahhh...long... 6.5/10.all good exepet that the monster still have its attribute and type and the last effect if it allows you to summon more then 1 monster.[/quote'] Don't pay attention to this guys supposed "FIX". It's all wrong. :/how come it is wrong ?!Anyways, the card is too overcomplicated. You don't have to make long effects to make "support" cards for Attributes/Archtypes/etc. etc.did not realy understand but this effect is not complicaed or long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 [spoiler= Wrong FIX]"Equip this card to a face-up Attack Position non-DARK monster you control. The equipped monster effect is negated and it cannot change Position or declare an attack. The equipped monster is also treated as a Dark Fiend-Type monster. During your End Phase' date=' for 5 turns, increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 100. Then activate one of the following effects:• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and increase a DARK monster you control ATK by half the equipped monster's ATK.• Remove this card and the equipped monster from play and Special Summon a DARK monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to or less than the equipped monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." IF you want to summon more then just 1 monster "DARK monsters whose Total Level" ....ahhh...long... 6.5/10.all good exepet that the monster still have its attribute and type and the last effect if it allows you to summon more then 1 monster.[/quote'] Don't pay attention to this guys supposed "FIX". It's all wrong. :/how come it is wrong ?!Anyways, the card is too overcomplicated. You don't have to make long effects to make "support" cards for Attributes/Archtypes/etc. etc.did not realy understand but this effect is not complicaed or long. ignore what that guy said, he is being obnoxious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 HUMPTY, BUMPTY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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