Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Ok, here is another possoble original =/ When this card is summoned successfully, you may choose the Level of this card. This card gains 1 of the following effects depending on its chosen Level:- 1: The origial ATK of this card becomes 500 and the original DEF of this card becomes 100. This card can attack your opponent directly.- 2: The original ATK of this card becomes 900 and the original DEF od this card becomes 500. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle- 3: The original ATK of this card becomes 1300 and the original DEF becomes 1000. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every monster your opponent Controls.- 4: The original ATK of this card becomes 1900 and the original DEF becomes 1400. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. "Ok, well, DJ made the Holo and 0 star. Thanks man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 as i like to say FULLY SICK aka very very nice XD but the last effect is differnent from the one you wrote on the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Defense Position needs to be capitalized lol9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 YES. its quite easy. well really simple. anyway, i would choose it to have 4 stars.nice card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Yay, thank you! I am trying so hard to think of original stuff, thanks alot guys!I fixed the Defence position. I always forget if if it supposed ot be caped =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Thanx for including that i did the Holo and 0 star ^_^ and as i said be4, very good idea and card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 What's the stats for 4 stars? Otherwise it's useless if you don't say how they can be acquired... e.g. add axe of despair... ATK = 1000???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Shoot, I copied and psted that,s ry, I fixed it Zyzzyx 9Stop Changing your name!!!!!!). Sry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 And you don't need the numerous "also"s xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Anybody else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 You should fix it with the errata changes I made in my review ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 I fixed the grammar stuff, but I can't do the level thing, so, I can't do the ATK thing, like XXXX thing without giving it a level >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Wait What? lol I don't understand =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 I got the grammar done, but as for the xxxx for atk and def you wanted, I can't do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 No no no no lol I meant, like, for the Level 1 effect... You write it like so: "The original ATK of this card becomes 500. The original DEF of this card becomes 100." etc. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 oh, ok, will do. sry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laetitia Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 I like it. Very original, and looks like it would be fun to play. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 xD It's all good Just as long as your cards become as great as possible, any mistakes along the way are okay ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Um, do you mean like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Yes That's absolutely perfect :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Yay, finally, and I fnised today with 2050 posts! yay, at ecactly 12:00!Thanks alot man, you are a great help! You rule! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Bump, sry, forgot yesterday,I just wanna see if more people like it ^_^SRy,i'm greedy XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Wow this card is really cool. Nice job! But since it is 0 stars, would it need some ruling that it doesn't require any tributes? 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 I'm shure it doesent need tributes. 0 star would be wird to tribute for 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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