[Last Call Draw] Lacking Faith, Does nothing for Yourselves

[Icy]

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For those who are wondering Articles are Words like; The, of, an, is, etc. I was trying hard to define what an Archetype is in the Card itself. So I hope it goes well.

 

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[HitoKage]

OCG seems fine, though I think articles should be lower cased, though have no card reference so can't say for sure.

[Icy]

OCG seems fine' date=' though I think articles should be lower cased, though have no card reference so can't say for sure.

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Added the Limit, I rushed the card. And what about the card itself?

[Kato_Zenamara]

The effect is just way too odd and overly situational for the effect it has. If you must keep the effect, take out the part about articles and reword the requirements.

 

And whats this crap about losing the duel? Just for the effect of a spell? If it was so damned important, you'd have more than one of it anyway.

[Icy]

The effect is just way too odd and overly situational for the effect it has. If you must keep the effect' date=' take out the part about articles and reword the requirements.

 

And whats this crap about losing the duel? Just for the effect of a spell? If it was so damned important, you'd have more than one of it anyway.

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Wrong. It properly defines what an Archetype in the YGO TCG/OCG is.

 

Also not quite as cards such as Heavy Storm etc are only used once in a duel, due to Limitation etc. This isn't called "Last Call Draw" anyway. Ooh and there's a VERY important part of this card you missed. Gonna wait for someone to say it though.

[Scyire]

The effect is utterly worthless.

A realistic card implies that the card will/could actually be used.

This card is basically an easy way to kill yourself.

[Kato_Zenamara]

Heavy Storm isn't worth losing the duel over.

 

And I don't see a "very" important card effect I missed. Unless its the fact that in parenthesis it says "card effects are not activated at this time", which might mean that no effects can be used during this "last turn" of yours? If so, you should state it in the effect, as that parenthesis doesn't say or imply that.

 

Yu-Gi-Oh! is not a grammar game, and no one would know what an article is had you not said it in your post. And people playing the game wouldn't have you standing over their shoulder to tell you that.

[Icy]

Costs =/= Effects boyo.

The Effect Negation during the Mill is to stop LS-like boosts.

 

Not useless.

 

@Above: Again, I am trying to define "Archetype" without it being a loose phrase. I opted for Article Word, so it would be better learned but Browarod was against it. Alas, you again miss the whole Costs =/= Effect thing.

[Scyire]

I understand the urge to make something original, but this is way too far.

I take back what I said, it's not useless.

But, imagine drawing this in the beginning of the duel. It's essentially wasting a space in your hand or the Magic/Trap card zone until the end of the duel. And even so, the effect isn't good enough to compensate death in a turn.

[HitoKage]

Might want to add something if you're going to keep the last sentence that would make it worth being a last resort.

[Kato_Zenamara]

... What?

So you're telling me that you want to stop the effects of monsters you discard, since its your last turn and you're screwed anyway, especially since you're using this to get out Heavy Storm?

 

As Scyire agreed, it is an utterly worthless card. Theres no getting around it.

[Icy]

I understand the urge to make something original' date=' but this is way too far.

I take back what I said, it's not useless.

But, imagine drawing this in the beginning of the duel. It's essentially wasting a space in your hand or the Magic/Trap card zone until the end of the duel. And even so, the effect isn't good enough to compensate death in a turn.

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Its intended as a Mid-Late Duel Card. Where it would be invaluable and the cost is nill. So you wouldn't run 3 now would you?

@Hitokage: MUCH Faster Diamond Dude isnt good enough for you, and the 3 card mill helps it further?

[RickiMinaj]

I like that fearsome death you added to the end of the card. It makes it all the more fun to play with. Death around the corner, so why not use it to see if you can pull off a victory. Soo, does that mean, If i have 2 archfiends i can use this card? Or I can't because archfiends only have 1 name in common?

[Icy]

Fixed it based on Essence's Suggestion.

[Scyire]

Final opinion: An interesting card which could possibly turn the tide of a duel, but the cost is much too expensive.

[Kato_Zenamara]

I didn't SAY you'd run three of these. I said you'd run three of a card you'd actually need or WANT to play, like an Archetype-specific card, which is what this card is trying to immitate. If you wanted to use Heavy Storm again, you'd use an effect that would recycle the card back to your hand, not one that would lose you the duel that turn.

[HitoKage]

Starting to get the original idea of the card, though the fix makes it much better.