ARMCARDMAKER22 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 ok first of all i changed the name from the warrior from the fog to the warrior within the fog i think it sounds better, and i also took your advices and changed it to 1500 instead of 2000 however the pic is not colored yet im working on it, thx keep giving advices Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Picture needs background + colouring in Warrior-Type Graveyard Summon Warrior-Type ATK OCG errors If this is your first card then its ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARMCARDMAKER22 Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Picture needs background + colouring in Warrior-Type Graveyard Summon Warrior-Type ATK OCG errors If this is your first card then its ok. thx ill update it thanks for the advise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Listen to DJ, he has it all right.Good for a first man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Change to 1500 or less. Pic needs color. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARMCARDMAKER22 Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Listen to DJ' date=' he has it all right.Good for a first man![/quote'] thx man glad you liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 it should be 1500 or less, and the card's triggershould be "activate only when a Warrior-Typemonster is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard."And maybe the monsters that are summoned can't attackor something like that, to even it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARMCARDMAKER22 Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Change to 1500 or less. Pic needs color. 7/10i changed it to 1500 you wre right thx but i havent colored it yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 waiting for it to be recoloured. nice effect but seen alike before many times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Could colour background could improve effect and OCG so a fair 3.6/5.1:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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