Kato_Zenamara Posted July 29, 2010 Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 This is yet again another attempt at a successful Bleach set. I'm starting out with Ichigo, and I will take requests for whoever you want from there. [spoiler=Shinigami][spoiler=Ichigo]This card gains 500 ATK during the damage step only. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Bankai Activate". You must also Tribute 1 "Kurosaki Ichigo" you control and cards whose total Levels equal 3 or more. This card gains 700 ATK during the Damage Step when this card battles a non-Warrior-Type monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster to destroy 1 card on the field. This card cannot be Special Summoned. If you control 1 face-up "Kurosaki Ichigo", you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing. If you activate this effect, destroy this card if "Kurosaki Ichigo" is removed from the field. If you do not activate this effect, this card gains 400 ATK during the Damage Step only. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Hollowification." You must also Tribute 1 "Ichigo's Inner Hollow" and monsters whose Levels equal 3 or more. When this card is successfully Ritual Summoned, after your 3rd End Phase, destroy this card. "Kurosaki Ichigo - Bankai" + "Kurosaki Ichigo - Hollowification"This card cannot be summoned except by Fusion Summon. Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Materials. When this card battles, skip damage calculation and destroy the monster this card battled with. Inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to the attack of the destroyed monster. During the End Phase of a turn this card was involved in a battle, destroy it and Special Summon 1 "Kurosaki Ichigo" from your graveyard. [spoiler=Renji]This card can attack each monster your opponent control's once each. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell Card "Bankai Activate." You must also Tribute 1 "Abarai Renji" and cards whose total Levels equal 3 or more. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects:- This card can attack each monster your opponent controls once each.- Destroy 1 card on the field. This card cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this effect.- Select 1 monster on the field and reduce its ATK and DEF to 0. Afterwards, half this card's ATK. [spoiler=Kenpachi]When this card is successfully summoned, destroy all other cards you control. Any attack position monster this card battles with is switched to defense position for the battle phase This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Kenpachi's Eyepatch." This card can attack every monster your opponent controls once each. When this card battles with a defense position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent's life points. Pay 1000 life points and Tribute 1 "Zaraki Kenpachi" card you control. Special Summon 1 "Zaraki Kenpachi Unleashed" from your hand or deck. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to a "Zaraki Kenpachi" card as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK/DEF of the equipped monster by 500 points. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) If you control another monster other than this card, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. [spoiler=Generic Spells and Traps]This card is used to Ritual Summon a "Bankai" Ritual Monster. You must also Tribute the monster and number of level stars written in the card text of the card you are attempting to summon. If this card is in the graveyard and you control 1 or more "Bankai" monsters, you can skip your Draw Phase and add this card your hand. This card is used to Ritual Summon a "Hollowification" Ritual Monster. You must also Tribute the monster and number of level stars written in the card text of the card you are attempting to summon. If this card is in the graveyard and you control 1 or more "Hollowification" monsters, you can skip your Draw Phase and add this card your hand. * I named the card "Kurosaki Ichigo - Resurreccion" because, 1. It sounds way more badass, and 2. Thats what Tousen refered to his as. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 29, 2010 Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 Hi dude, great set. Hope it goes well for you. As for your "Ichigo Resurreccion" Fusion, I suggest getting a better pic. 1. It's too small, and 2. it has a white border around it. Other than that, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Thanks for the comment. The pictures too small? Does it look stretched or disformed or something? And yes, I realize there is a white border, but I was hoping its epic-ness would distract from that. I would get a better pic, but I'm scared that if I try to edit it, I won't be able to get it up at all, after the trouble I was having with the last card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Sorry, but you said better than noob so i felt like nit picking at your cards haha Ichigo hallowificationThis card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Hollowification". You must also offer 1 "Ichigo's Inner Hollow" and monsters whose total level stars equal 3 or more. Destroy this card your 3rd End Phase after this card's Ritual Summon. haha, and capitalize Graveyard on the fusion monster. Cool pics though, and i dont even like bleach haha. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Thanks, I guess thats a good review for someone who hates the manga :P I'll take notes of the corrections. Like I said, I'm scared that if I try and alter the pictures the topic'll get screwed over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renji696 Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 can u make a renji card perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Renji there shall be! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/498420/abs-bleach-claws-hollow-horns-kuroi-tsuki-kurosaki http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/434812/3d-abs-bleach-cuts-highres-horns-injury-kurosaki_i http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/433919/abs-alternate_color-bleach-claws-cuts-horns-injury those are better pics for ressurection.. using it or not is up to you http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/329398/bandages-bankai-bleach-kurosaki_ichigo-male-orange Hollowification pic, but i think its fine as it is now http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/234542/bandages-bleach-kevin_yan-kurosaki_ichigo-male-ora please use this pic for Ichigo, i think its better than the one right now since it doesn't have Rukia in it xD for the cards, i think they are pretty good, keep up the good work and please use my pics because i think they are better than what they are now... but if you don't want to use them, i wont stop you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 gah krazy, how you gonna come in here and tell this guy to redo everything your way? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 i didn't say he has to... im just saying those look cool so he should use it (yes i said please use these i apologize for that), never said he has to... i mean if he doesn't want to i'm not gonna say anything more... but i don't really like pics that come straight from the anime or anything, but yeah i apologize for making it seem like they are my cards or something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 high above n00b quality...? there's OCG errors... Bankai should tribute monsters whose level equals 6 or 7... u mean lower than noob quality... 6.5/10 OCG Fix Ichigo This card gains 500 ATK during the damage step only. Bankai This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Bankai Activate". You must also Tribute 1 "Kurosaki Ichigo" you control and cards whose total Level equal 3 or more. This card gains 700 ATK during the Damage Step when this card battles a non-Warrior-Type monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster to destroy 1 card on the field. Inner Hollow This card cannot be Special Summoned. If you control 1 face-up "Kurosaki Ichigo", you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing. If you activate this effect, destroy this card if "Kurosaki Ichigo" is removed from the field. If you do not activate this effect, this card gains 400 ATK during the Damage Step only. Hollowification (Copy Bankai's correction for the Summoning thing) Destroy this card your third End Phase after this card's Ritual Summon. When this card is Ritual Summoned, after your third End Phase, destroy this card Bankai Ritual Card This card is used to Ritual Summon a "Bankai" Ritual Monster. You must Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose Level equals _ If this card is in the graveyard and you control 1 or more "Bankai" monsters, you can skip your Draw Phase and add this card your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Yes, because capitalization errors automatically makes it worse than cards who completely ignore OCG at all, or whose grammar makes it impossible to read or understand, or where every card has 4000 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 A lot of capitalizing errors as already mentioned. Kurosaki Ichigo's picture is not suitable imo and Ressurrection's picture has a white border.Bankai activation's picture isn't quite suitable as well. It's more like Bankai Achievement Training or something.The cards are definitelly better than most of the newbies'cards, but there is more to be wanted to reach "perfection" (or at least be near it)Keep on working. I would like to see the Renji cards, but also Mayuri and Toshiro, and Kenpachi of course ;-)8/10 is my current rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 6/10 Many OCG errors and effects are realy not original.I see no effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 I'm not going to b**** about it, but don't come into my topic and say I didn't put effort into my cards.And a few capitalization errors doesn't constitute "many OCG errors." Ok, its become known that no one likes the Ichigo picture. Don't know why, but you guys just don't. I'll get on that, and the Resurreccion picture as soon as I find that the posting problems have been fixed. I did that picture for the bankai card since thats the closet thing I can get to generic bankai. It was Urahara's invention that allowed its user to master Bankai in three days, and since theres no universal bankai activation sequence, that was the best I could come up with without getting a white background that just says "Bankai!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 First thing to mention : WTF.... finally another guy who uses the classic original name order *hugs* .... I hate when "Ichigo Kurosaki" ect. is written. It has to be like in Japan... "Kurosaki Ichigo" ;D and really nice effects go I give ya 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Lol, thanks. So, I've got Renji up at bat next, and either Toshiro or Zaraki after that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 well I would go with Ken-chan next. I would even make him "Assault Mode" witouth his Eye Patch ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Its not bad, its just that Ichigo is underpowered a little. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Renji is up, as well as the Hollowification card I had trouble with. Congrats everyone! I did the OCG changes, but in the process, the server spammed me again and screwed the pictures up. I'll try and get that fixed as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 UPDATE: Pictures have been fixed, so every card is its own card now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 WTF.... finally another guy who uses the classic original name order *hugs* .... I hate when "Ichigo Kurosaki" ect. is written. It has to be like in Japan... "Kurosaki Ichigo" ;DBut we're not in japan. When japanese people come to america they say it american. When i go to japan my last name is first. Its wierd people like you that give anime fans a bad name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 But we're not in japan. When japanese people come to america they say it american. When i go to japan my last name is first. Its wierd people like you that give anime fans a bad name. No, in Japan, last names go first. Bleach is a Japanese-originated series, and the names are written backwards in the manga, and said so in the original anime. One, the names sound cooler in their original order, and two, since its a Japanese Manga, they can go either way. Truthfully, someone who americanizes Japanese things too much would give anime fans a bad name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 but we're in america haha. Like i said. Your not supposed to do that to there names IN AMERICA. I feel like bandit kieth haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Whatever, We've all got out opinions. And you forgot Bandit Keith is really a Canadian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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