Alordzynix Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Grammar and OCG is bad, I know. So don't post here just saying it is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Grammar and OCG is bad' date=' I know. So don't post here just saying it is bad.[/b'] DARK not dark attribute equal Summon "Jinzo" cannot this card is activated. That was for card 1 ^^^ card 2 below; Hol?? "Jinzo" OCG is wayyyy off. Also the picture is done badly. the edges around jinzo make it look crappy. Cards effects wise Card 1 - its not good, its easier and better to SS jinzo via jinzo returner. Card 2 - Effect is ok, not great though. Overall - needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 DARK not dark attribute equal Summon "Jinzo" cannot this card is activated. That was for card 1 ^^^ card 2 below; Hol?? "Jinzo" OCG is wayyyy off. Also the picture is done badly. the edges around jinzo make it look crappy. Cards effects wiseCard 1 - its not good' date=' its easier and better to SS jinzo via jinzo returner.[/b'] Card 2 - Effect is ok, not great though. Overall - needs work. Thanks for taking all the mistakes ouit of it so all other people can be quite about that. I have alot of cards posted where almost the only comments where: Bad Grammor (or something like that). These cards are just quickly made to be later used in my fan-fic. As for the Bold thing my card also can special summon from the deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Ohh fanfic cards, in that case they are alright ^_^ And i hate it when ppl say 'bad grammar' and dont specify so i always now, try to point out mistakes ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bushido123 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 If its on a fanfic or not, correct the mistakes that DJ wrote, you can do that no longer then 1 minute, and I ain't sure about Pshyco Hol's picture.If its on a fanfic or not, correctOver All, my judging conclusions are that you get an "B".Over All, my judging conclusions are that you get an "B". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 If its on a fanfic or not' date=' [u']correct[/u] the mistakes that DJ wrote, you can do that no longer then 1 minute, and I ain't sure about Pshyco Hol's picture.If its on a fanfic or not, correctOver All, my judging conclusions are that you get an "B".Over All, my judging conclusions are that you get an "B". Whats a "B"?. Your pretty "new" to me so you don't know that I'm dutch. In The Netherlands we don't rate with A's and F's but with 1 to 10. Could you rate like other persons on this site lke 6/10? It makes it for other people easyer to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 not bad, but in the second one, in the card name you spelled "Hole" wrong, otherwise 7/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 I just didn't saw I forgot the "e'. Anyway fixed the first card but I'm not realy sure about the changes to the second cards effect. Also who can make me such a picture better will get 2 reps. Also I found a mistake in the first card. It isn't "you cannot Normal Summon and Special Summon" but "you cannot Normal Summon or Set" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal_Reese Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 I think he forgot to point out that the word Pshyco is spelled wrong. I think it's Psycho. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zachary132 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 I think that instead of send a monster with 1000 attack or less should be 2000 attack or more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 It isn't because that would make the card alittle bit useless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest nwslap12 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Lol, if you made a trap card I would slap you!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 eh, there alright, though...you get 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 I made a better pic for the psycho hole for you. Hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Pretty cool man. I can't say alot, it's been said. sry. lol8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Damn. i thought i was the only one to use that image on the first one. PS. "Psycho" is not spelled "Pshyco" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 I think the cards are great! The pictures could improve, but still pretty cool! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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