Ezmoe Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 I changed life point Damage. it's 100 now.my deck was made to remove cards from play, so I thought this card up.I'm thinking of more......soon.....on this same thread....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aibara Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Oh, first of all, the pic is amazing! Great quality! And about the OCG, I can see some little mistakes: 1) your End Phase 2)Your opponent loses 500 Life Points x the number of cards removed from play, from your side of the Field, on each of his Standby Phases. So, the only "serious" error I see, is the last sentence.Now, let's see Pic: 10/10 (great quality and very good theme) OCG: 7/10 (the last sentence was the problem. I'm not very good at OCG, though, so I may be mistaken!:-)) Overall: (10+7)/2=17/2=8.5That's a good rating! Keep on doing good cards, and I hope your next cards will be as good as this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 that pic is over used. but that is agood card for a D.D. deck. so i give you a 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Aibara got the OCG taken care of, but i think you should lower the LP Damage, make it 200 X the number of cards in your hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezmoe Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Thx Aibara, I havent got a good comment in Forever, I'm glad someone likes my card(s).oh, and Jad, I never used this pic, ever! I saw it on the internet and I thought it would be a good pic for my card. Oh, first of all, the pic is amazing! Great quality! And about the OCG, I can see some little mistakes: 1) your End Phase 2)Your opponent loses 500 Life Points x the number of cards removed from play, from your side of the Field, on each of his Standby Phases. So, the only "serious" error I see, is the last sentence.Now, let's see Pic: 10/10 (great quality and very good theme) OCG: 7/10 (the last sentence was the problem. I'm not very good at OCG, though, so I may be mistaken!:-)) Overall: (10+7)/2=17/2=8.5That's a good rating! Keep on doing good cards, and I hope your next cards will be as good as this one.What is a D.D deck? Heres a spell and a monster.I don't like the pic for the summoner but everything else is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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