Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 ^^Title... Harsh critique encouraged. Don't go easy on me because i am new. OCG corrections are very much appreciated. [spoiler=Madness Manipulator] [spoiler=LORE] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by 1 "Madness Overlord." When this card is Summoned successfully, your opponent discards his hand and draws equivalent to the previous hand. If your opponent has a monster card with a DEF of 1500 or higher send it to the Graveyard. [spoiler=Madness King] [spoiler=LORE] When this card is sent to the Graveyard by an effect, randomly select one card from your opponents hand. If this card is a monster, destroy the card. If it is a Spell or Trap Card, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, the card you selected is treated as a monster card and is sent to the Graveyard on your side of the field. [spoiler=Madness Overlord] [spoiler=LORE] "Maddening Minion" + "Maddening Minion"When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of a Fiend-Type monster, Special Summon 1 "Madness Manipulator". If this Summon fails, destroy all DARK monsters in your opponent's control. [spoiler=Maddening Minion] [spoiler=LORE] When this card is Special Summoned by Tributing 2 DARK Fiend-Type monsters, randomly select 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. If the selected card is a DARK monster, place it in your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle place the selected card in your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 These aren't good. King is to weak for some one to waste an effect to destroy. Most people would just run him over. The fact that it can back fire only makes it that much worse. Overlord is 't worth it. It's effect is really situational and it's stats are VERY lackluster. Not only that, but it can back fire on you. Manipulator can't be summoned since Overload can't summon him. Not only that but i can only assume this won't destroy face downs cards meaning his burn effect won't happen. Over all the cards are just lacking. Still, keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 I didn't drop my jaw. These are very underpowered. Next time dont get too cocky, the trolls will eat you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 These aren't good. King is to weak for some one to waste an effect to destroy. Most people would just run him over. The fact that it can back fire only makes it that much worse. Overlord is 't worth it. It's effect is really situational and it's stats are VERY lackluster. Not only that, but it can back fire on you. Manipulator can't be summoned since Overload can't summon him. Not only that but i can only assume this won't destroy face downs cards meaning his burn effect won't happen. Over all the cards are just lacking. Still, keep at it. I couldnt say it better myself. Overall these are good for a newbie but thats not saying a ton... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Hmm...many thanks guys i'll get started on fixing them right away...I didn't drop my jaw. These are very underpowered. Next time dont get too cocky, the trolls will eat you I'll probably eat the trolls before the eat me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 BUMPU MM UPMUB I've always wanted to do that XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master D Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 By fusion card do you mean Fusion Monster or a card that can fuse. If the first is true then you're a noob 'cause Fusion Monsters aren't in the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Ah...thx for pointing that out...fixes comin' right up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Well i still think its a bit odd. You get 2 "Madness Kings" to fusion them to a "Madness Overlord" then "Madness Manipulator" uses his effect that basicly makes it so only strange powerhouse cards can attack. Im not saying this is bad, and its honestly getting closer to being balanced but i dont understand why Madness Overlord has so much less defence when its made of 2 "Madness kings"The pictures are okay and the effects also okay 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Well i still think its a bit odd. You get 2 "Madness Kings" to fusion them to a "Madness Overlord" then "Madness Manipulator" uses his effect that basicly makes it so only strange powerhouse cards can attack. Im not saying this is bad, and its honestly getting closer to being balanced but i dont understand why Madness Overlord has so much less defence when its made of 2 "Madness kings"The pictures are okay and the effects also okay 7/10 ...Ok ill fix that as soon as I can thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lostinthemaze92 Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 The fusion monster looks a lot like my favorite Zelda bad guy, Vaati. King seems a bit too pointless and unless it's in defense position it's a fail. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 lol yeah im fixing right now :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killer RomeoX Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 how do you have two madness kings with different effects?? Im only giving you a 5/5 for the pics sorry bud better luck next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 how do you have two madness kings with different effects?? Im only giving you a 5/5 for the pics sorry bud better luck next time Oh crap lol... It was the wrong card lol fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 It seems better to me now 7.5/10 >_> all the work for a .5 increase, i might as well give you a rep for actually careing to change your cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 It seems better to me now 7.5/10 >_> all the work for a .5 increase, i might as well give you a rep for actually careing to change your cards Ok thanks. I hope I can make better improvements in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted August 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2010 B U M PU~~~MM~~~UP M U B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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