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@Black - Things in parentheses still count. I didn't highlight the whole sentence, just that part.

 

Also, no, you said he was trapped in a Genjutsu for a day.

 

LIAR

No, they technically do not exist. They are... OOC Knowledge.

 

I said, immediately upon explaining, that when HE tried Genjutsu he was trapped for a day. AKA He screwed up. BADLY.

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If they were such, they would have no value to the overall sentence, rather to alert the reader of something.

 

But parentheses =/= between comas.

 

Between comas are for when you wanna separate something.

 

 

 

TRAPPED FOR A DAY.

 

not

 

In a coma for a day.

 

There IS a difference.

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Actually, it does. Look:

 

"Still, growing up, he made it to the Academy."

 

has the same meaning as

 

"Still, he made it to the Academy."

 

Just with a LITTLE bit more knowledge, that was in no way needed.

 

Filler, which can apply to a SATIRICAL RP, says otherwise, DL.

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OBJECTION!

 

Not the same as

 

Still, Stone somehow managed to grow older and get into the Ninja Academy.

 

Speakin of, IT WASN'T EVEN BETWEEN COMAS

 

LIAR

 

LIAR

 

 

 

Also, different situation is different >_>

 

In fact

 

Then, he tried to do Genjutsu. A giant chicken swallowed him whole, and he came out a day later.

 

Sounds more like he was swallowed and shat out a day later.

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@El - HUSHYOU >:T

 

@Black -

 

1. Well was, the rest of the sentence wasn't ¬_¬

 

So my point still stands, it was a valid point.

 

2. NO ONE CAN KEEP A GIANT GENJUTSU CHICKEN FOR A WHOLE DAY

 

THERE IS NOT ENOUGH CHAKRA IN KISAME AND NARUTO COMBINED TO

 

AND THE GENERIC NINJA INCIDENT WAS ANOTHER, BECAUSE IT WAS NOT A MISTAKEN SUMMON......THING

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.......

 

*shoots Black-kun*

 

Frikin don't argue! Admit to DL he is not worth fighting with and that your logic pwns so this can end!

 

 

1. But, it was meant to be. So, I am right.

 

2. He activated it, and it took course, and put him into a Coma. It required no maintaining.

 

@Ecchi: Admit I'm wrong to DL?! NEVAH!

 

....................

 

*pulls out device with names listed on a screen*

 

*scrolls down to Black-kun*

 

*clicks "edit stats"*

 

*drops Intellect from 10 to 7*

 

*puts device away*

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