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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

 

You're funny Fusion.

 

Reborn is better than Naruto, simple as that.

 

Naruto could beat it without Shippuden tho.

 

 

I mean

 

Naruto: Overpowered ninjas who don't use stealth very often, and whose main character is a loud ninja

Reborn: Baby hitman gets the job of training a high-school loser to be the next mafia boss

 

Even Reborn's PREMISE is better :/

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Rofl

 

Well, give us YOUR opinion, Shadow, since you've read both, and you're not a Narutard (I think)

 

Which is better, KHR, or Naruto?

 

Rofl

 

Well, give us YOUR opinion, Shadow, since you've read both, and you're not a Narutard (I think)

 

Which is better, KHR, or Naruto?

 

Rofl

 

Well, give us YOUR opinion, Shadow, since you've read both, and you're not a Narutard (I think)

 

Which is better, KHR, or Naruto?

 

Rofl

 

Well, give us YOUR opinion, Shadow, since you've read both, and you're not a Narutard (I think)

 

Which is better, KHR, or Naruto?

 

Rofl

 

Well, give us YOUR opinion, Shadow, since you've read both, and you're not a Narutard (I think)

 

Which is better, KHR, or Naruto?

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Lol you narutards and your wiating for chapters.

 

Also, same to you Fusion, you will never convince me anything is worse than Narutoafter time-skip.

 

I'm dead serious, Naruto Shippuden is so average, it's basically the worst manga I've read.

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Lol you narutards and your wiating for chapters.

 

Also, same to you Fusion, you will never convince me anything is worse than Narutoafter time-skip.

 

I'm dead serious, Naruto Shippuden is so average, it's basically the worst manga I've read.

What about NARUTO BEFORE AFTER AFTER TIME SKIP?

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[spoiler=New chapter]

So now we know how Edo Tensei works, pretty much all our questions have been answered.

And that it's Aizen-level of godmod.

Anko's gonna die :/

And no Jiraiya or 4th eh...

Well El, at least Kakashi's dad doesn't sound too far off for ya.

Looking forward to next chapter, apparently Gaara's division will be brought into battle.

 

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[spoiler=New chapter]

So now we know how Edo Tensei works, pretty much all our questions have been answered.

And that it's Aizen-level of godmod.

Anko's gonna die :/

And no Jiraiya or 4th eh...

Well El, at least Kakashi's dad doesn't sound too far off for ya.

Looking forward to next chapter, apparently Gaara's division will be brought into battle.

 

*goes and reads new chap*

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Wow, no chapter discussion?

Everyone's had time to read now, so I'll talk in the open.

I think the new Rasengan might be Naruto's version of a Kamehameha, since the Kyuubi was shown blasting waves before.

And on a side note: YCM Awards are up, go vote.

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231813-ycm-awards-december-2010-were-back/page__p__4841399__fromsearch__1#entry4841399

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The best manga ever is 20th Century Boys.

 

And I say that knowing my favorite is Hayate.

 

Because I KNOW it's a masterpiece, it even got an excellence Award.

 

 

@Fusion - Out of all the manga I've read a lot of, not just sampled, Naruto's my least favorite, because it's so average. Every other I've read (I guess I just have a gift for picking good manga) has been really good, or at least with a more interesting concept.

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We co-OWN, not co-HOST :33

 

Meh, if someone complains, I'll change it.

 

And yes, I saw your nomination, thankz youz <3

 

Altho I'm probably not gonna win xDD

 

Unless no other fanfictions get nominated O_O

 

>:3

 

And no, it's not an interesting concept.

 

Now, what I think would have made Naruto more interesting.

 

[spoiler=<3]

So, after he defeats Mizuki, and is about to become a ninja, Mizuki's ally kills Iruka with a kunai to the head, from behind. Naruto turns around and the real fox comes out, with all the rage he's feeling. So he kills the guy, and soon reverts back to normal. He sees the blood on his hands and runs away from the village, unable to face it with a kill under his belt. The anguish and guilt slowly consume him, and he falls deeper and deeper into the darkness, and further and further from his village.

 

One day, almost overwhelmed by darkness, he walks upon the sand village, and accidentaly bumps into Gaara, a boy with much the same problrm as he, except he doesn't feel guilty, he just dislikes humans. So Gaara attacks Naruto , and they have an epic fight, in which Naruto again goes Kyubi, but manages to stop himself within an inch of killing Gaara. Naruto begins crying, and basically lets out all his anguish and pain for the unable-to-move Gaara to hear.

 

This later on teaches Gaara that not all humans are bad, for Naruto spared his life when he could have killed him, and teaches him he is not the only one suffering. Meanwhile, by letting it all out, Naruto grew much more calm and happy. He goes back to the leaf, and finds that his small apartment was confiscated, so he wanders around the ramen shop, and orders one ramen. He eats it, but has no money to pay it, so he promises the Ichiraku ramen shop guy he'll work there to pay it back. The ramen shop guy gets an idea to have him work there, and he'll get free ramen and a place to sleep. Naruto readily agrees, and begins working his hardest.

 

However, soon, one day, a thief comes in and murders the ramen shop guy by accident, with an accidental shot from his gun. Naruto goes Kyubi, and gets to punch the guy in the face once, knocking him out, before the ramen guy's daughter hugs him from behind, crying, and begging him to stop. Naruto recovers from Kyubi, and begins crying as well. After a bit, the girl calls the police, and they pick the unconscious thief up. The next morning, she tells Naruto she will work to run the ramen shop by herself, because she wanted to have strength to go on with her own two feet, and she found a place Naruto could stay.

 

So it turns out, Naruto becomes a full-time guest in the Hyuga family house, since Hinata's father owed that ramen shop owner a favor, and wanted to repay him. But he didn't really like the idea of Naruto living in his household, so he shunend him. In fact, so did Neji, and most in the Hyuga family. The only one who spoke to him on occasion, and was nice to him, was Hinata. But one day, someone kidnapped Hinata, in hopes of bringing the Hyuga clan's secret under their own hands. Naruto, having lost his only friend, goes after the kidnappers. He beats them down, and rescues Hinata. The criminals are handed over to the police, and are found out to be ninja from the sand village.

 

Meanwhile, Hyuga's dad, and the whole of the hyuga clan, begins accepting Naruto more, and he lives happily with them, with Hinata and Neji as his new best friends. But then....the Sand declares war on the leaf...

 

 

 

I could write more about how Gaara would have to pick sides, and all that garbage, but meh, you get the point.,

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