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I dunno.
DL's back in though.
If anything happens to us 3, we'll worry about a replacement then.
And the comedy was forced?
Where?
Everyone seemed to like the closet scene .__.
If you mean with Cortez, that's the point, his comedy is as if someone from above is forcing him to say these things that are supposed to be funny, but only end up hitting or missing :3
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The comedy seemed force in a lot of places. Like, I felt the way El and his dad were talking to be too...unnatural. I mean, it was relistic to a point, but it just kinda crossed the line, they seemed like good buddies instead of dad and kid.


And the closet scene was too...unrealistic for my tast. IDK, I just don't feel that it could actually happen, stuffing 26 people into a closet.
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El and his dad had a similar convo IRL when he went to Miami .-.
And idk, I wanted to give El a dad that understood him. The REAL him and not parents that usually are blind to some aspects of their kids. Maybe I just conveyed it wrong.
As for the closet, it was a big closet .-.
It's possible, just hard to pull off.
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