Dark Samus

[Im Still Jebus]

This is my first time to ever make a card. Can I get some hints?

[Engetsu]

The card is very Op'ed (Overpowered)

 

A level 6 monster with 2800 ATK/3000 DEF who can attack twice and negate any destroyed monsters effect. A tad much don't you think?

 

Give the card some drawbacks to balance out it's effects. Remove the double attack or the negating effect, change your monsters level to 8 or 9, and if you can, find a better pic for it.

 

You have slight OCG (Official Card Grammar) errors. Destroyed and monster doesn't need to be capitalized. Place a comma after monster in the first sentence. Also change "Negate any effect destroyed by Dark Samus" to "Negate the effects of Effect Monsters destroyed by this card", if you decide to keep that over the double attack effect.

 

6.5/10 since this was your first attempt.

[Im Still Jebus]

The card is very Op'ed (Overpowered)

 

A level 6 monster with 2800 ATK/3000 DEF who can attack twice and negate any destroyed monsters effect. A tad much don't you think?

 

Give the card some drawbacks to balance out it's effects. Remove the double attack or the negating effect, change your monsters level to 8 or 9, and if you can, find a better pic for it.

 

You have slight OCG (Official Card Grammar) errors. Destroyed and monster doesn't need to be capitalized. Place a comma after monster in the first sentence. Also change "Negate any effect destroyed by Dark Samus" to "Negate the effects of Effect Monsters destroyed by this card", if you decide to keep that over the double attack effect.

 

6.5/10 since this was your first attempt.

 

 

Hey thanks for the info. This was my 1st card, so yeah thanks for the tip.

[theunholysoldier]

i wouldt want dual sum1 with that dark