[D.A.]Are these crap or not (Constructive Criticism welcome)

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

A month or so i released 3 torque monsters that got great reviews. How every due to the YCM move i cant bump that thread without necroing it so i'm re-releasing them with new cards :D

 

[spoiler=The 3 Original]

[spoiler=Torque Synchronizer]

 

[spoiler=Torque Engine][spoiler=Lore]If there is a face-up "Torque Synchronizer" on the field this card is treated as a non-Tuner monster. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up you can search your Deck for 1 "Torque Synchronizer" and Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up defense position(you cannot use this card as a non-tuner for a Synchro Summon this turn), The Deck is then shuffled. [spoiler=IM] deviantart, Seig_Warheit

 

 

 

[spoiler=Torque Technician (was torque Mecha Warrior but changed it to fit the arch-type name theme][spoiler=Lore]"Torque Synchronizer" or "Torque Engine" + 1 or more non-Tuner monster's

You can reveal this card from your Extra Deck to make its Level count as 9 until the End of this turn. If "Torque Synchronizer" was used to Synchro Summon this monster, all Synchro monsters in your Extra Deck lower their Level by 1. If "Torque Engine" was used to Synchro Summon this monster, draw 1 card. in addition if both "Torque Synchronizer" and "Torque Engine" were used to Synchro Summon this Level 9 monster it gain the following effect: Once per turn you can pick up the top 3 cards from your Deck if 1 of them is a Level 4 or lower monster send it to the Graveyard and inflict Damage equal to its Total ATK and DEF(if there a multiple Level 4 or lower monster's select only 1), return the remaining cards to the Deck and shuffle it. [spoiler=IM]deviantart, Seig_Warheit

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=The new additions]

[spoiler=Torque Accelerator][spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned you can search your Deck for 1 "Torque" monster and 1 Equip Spell Card and add them to your hand (the Deck is then shuffled), if this effect was used you cannot use this card as a Tuner monster for a Synchro Summon this turn. [spoiler=IM]Self made image

 

 

 

[spoiler=Torque Mechanic][spoiler=Lore]This cards other type is Machine. When you control a face-up "Torque Accelerator" you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Summoned you can search your Deck for 1 "Torque Engine" and Special Summon it face-up on your field. Once during each of your Main Phase 1s you can pay 500 Life Points, until the end of this turn this card is treated as a non-Tuner monster. [spoiler=IM]deviantart, tsteeley

 

 

 

[spoiler=Torque Reloader][spoiler=Lore]"Torque" Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster's

Once during each of your Main Phase 1's if you have not Synchro Summoned this turn you can search your Deck for 1 "Torque" monster and Special Summon it to your field in face-up Attack position (the Deck is then shuffled). When this card is attacked you can remove from play 1 "Torque"monster from your Graveyard to negate the attack.[spoiler=IM]deviantart, Seig_Warheit

 

 

 

[spoiler=Torque Programmer][spoiler=Lore]"Torque Mechanic" + 1 or more non-Tuner monster's

This monsters other type is Machine. Once during each of your End Phase's select 1 card on the field and remove it from play. during your next Standby Phase after this effect activation activate 1 of the following effects based on the selected cards type:

Spell: Increase this monsters ATK by 500

Trap: Destroy 1 card on the field

Monster: Inflict Damage to your opponent equal to half the total monsters ATK and DEF

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Soon to come]

[spoiler=Torque Wrench]

Equip Spell Card

This card can ony be equipped to a "Torque" monster you control. Activate 1 of the following effect's based on the monsters type:

Tuner-The equipped monster counts as a non-Tuner monster. If the equipped monster is used to foe a Synchro Summon add this card to your hand instead of sending it to the Graveyard

non-Tuner-The equipped monster counts as a Tuner monster. If the equipped monster is used for a Synchro Summon add this card to your hand instead of the Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Torque Acceleration Toolbox]

Quick-play Spell Card

This card can only be activated when you control a "Torque Accelerator". Search your Deck for Equip Spell Card(s) equal to the number of "Torque" monsters you control and add them to your hand, the Deck is then shuffled.

 

 

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

bump the bump

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

bump

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

yet another annoying bumb

[Lexadin]

You already know my comment on the 1st 3.

The newer ones have bad and unfitting pics imo. I would have left it with the 1st 3.

 

A 7.9/10

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

You already know my comment on the 1st 3.

The newer ones have bad and unfitting pics imo. I would have left it with the 1st 3.

 

A 7.9/10

thanks for the honest rate. However what did you think of there effects?

[The Great Wolf Sif]

Lexadin has a point the pics for the new Torque are ......yah umm

anyways over all 6/10

note try to use the same pic animation.

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

Lexadin has a point the pics for the new Torque are ......yah umm

anyways over all 6/10

note try to use the same pic animation.

could you at least rate the effects.....

[The Great Wolf Sif]

Any ways OCG fix's

Note: Don't use appostriphes in effects only commas, periods, and brackets. Also I do read a cards effect before I rate them I all ways do.

 

Torque Mechanic

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. When you control a face-up "Torque Accelerator" you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Summoned you can search your Deck for 1 "Torque Engine" and Special Summon it to your field. Once per turn during your Main Phase 1 you can pay 500 Life Points, until the End Phase of the turn of this effects activation this card is treated as a non-Tuner monster.

 

Torque Programmer

"Torque Mechanic" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn during each of your End Phases select 1 card on the field and remove it from play. During your next Standby Phase after this effects activation activate 1 of the following effects based on the selected cards type:

Spell: Increase this monsters ATK by 500

Trap: Destroy 1 card on the field

Monster: Inflict Damage to your opponent equal to half the total monsters ATK and DEF

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

Any ways OCG fix's

Note: Don't use appostriphes in effects only commas, periods, and brackets. Also I do read a cards effect before I rate them I all ways do.

 

Torque Mechanic

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. When you control a face-up "Torque Accelerator" you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Summoned you can search your Deck for 1 "Torque Engine" and Special Summon it to your field. Once per turn during your Main Phase 1 you can pay 500 Life Points, until the End Phase of the turn of this effects activation this card is treated as a non-Tuner monster.

 

Torque Programmer

"Torque Mechanic" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn during each of your End Phases select 1 card on the field and remove it from play. During your next Standby Phase after this effects activation activate 1 of the following effects based on the selected cards type:

Spell: Increase this monsters ATK by 500

Trap: Destroy 1 card on the field

Monster: Inflict Damage to your opponent equal to half the total monsters ATK and DEF

i already knew those OCG problems -_-....

also one more Q.

How much of your rate was based on the pics?

[The Great Wolf Sif]

2 Points Since it was 4 cards.

Anyways Most of my grading is OCG