tallman95 Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Here's a new set I'm workin on.(I'm actually going to make this one lol):DI got the name idea from God Kaiba. MonstersMonsters[/align] SpellsSpells TrapsTrapsNone Yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 cool 9/10 but i keep thinking to my self about something familar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Thank you. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 ^your welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Here's a new set I'm workin on.(I'm actually going to make this one lol):DI got the name idea from God Kaiba. MonstersMonsters[/center][/center] TrapsTrapsNone Yet card 1 Spelling error opponent's discard opponent's Card 2 Tributing card name. attacked Level possibly overpowered Card 3 card name is better OCG. Overpowered Card 4 horrible picture counters do not go in " 's Could be improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I'll fix them but I can't find a good pic for th colosseum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Here's a new set I'm workin on.(I'm actually going to make this one lol):DI got the name idea from God Kaiba. MonstersMonsters[/center][/center] TrapsTrapsNone Yet card 1 Spelling error opponent's discard opponent's Card 2 Tributing card name. attacked Level possibly overpowered Card 3 card name is better OCG. Overpowered Card 4 horrible picture counters do not go in " 's Could be improved. you never told me my mistakes :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 What DJ said, well, just work some on grammar. That is all I can say, i'm not the best at grammar either =/7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Errors fixed and new card added.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Dika- I would maybe either lower its level to 5, or increase its attack to 2500 or 2600. Since it’s basically a monarch with a cost, feel free to give it a higher atk in case you don’t have a GW monster to tribute. When this card is Summoned, you can tribute 1 “Gladiator Warrior” monster to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. Balrica This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 “Gladiator Warrior” monster. When this card is attacked by a Level 5 or higher monster, double this card’s original ATK during the Damage Step only. RasicaThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only by Special Summoned by removing from play 1 “Gladiator Warrior” monster you control. While this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all “Gladiator Warrior” monsters by 500. That’s all I got time for today! I hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 The new card is very simple =/6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 really cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I think you did a great job! Just work on your grammar, and it would be perfect! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jadenyuki52 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 THEY ARE ONE OF THE BEST CARDS I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 jadenyuki52... THAT HURT MY FEELINGS_____ WAAAAA otherwise--- 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Here's a new set I'm workin on.(I'm actually going to make this one lol):DI got the name idea from God Kaiba. MonstersMonsters[/center][/center] TrapsTrapsNone Yet card 1 Spelling error opponent's discard opponent's Card 2 Tributing card name. attacked Level possibly overpowered Card 3 card name is better OCG. Overpowered Card 4 horrible picture counters do not go in " 's Could be improved. WHAHOOOOO CARM DOWN GEEES lol ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 All errors fixed :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 8/10 from me tallman95 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 they are ok, really you can change the pic, find a better one for the spell. but nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 they are ok' date=' really you can change the pic, find a better one for the spell. but nice cards.[/quote']I can't find any good pics for the colosseum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 i can find some for you, ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Ok thank you.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 here- best i could find Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Well it's better than the old one I'll change it thanks.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Dika and Rasica are a bit overpowered. Especially since the second one is an 8 star that requires only 1 tribute with its effect. Just a bit of editing and they're perfect! Good job :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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