Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Here is my newest attempt to make original effects, Zwischen Welten. I really tried on grammar, and I would like to thanks DJ-Osiris for pointing out the problems ^_^ Once per turn, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects: - Remove from play this card in your Graveyard. - Send this removed from play card to your Graveyard. While this card is in your Graveyard, all cards sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. While this card is removed from play, all cards that are removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. Please ignore the removed from play area unless you know exactly what it should be, neither DJ or I know what it should be, Zone or Area =/Please comment and rate ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Sounds like it should be a title of a Rammstein song lol Lovly picture, and as ive already said, nice effect ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Thanks, if people ask, I will tell them what the name means, and think first, I gave it a name that fits XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 it has a good effect but the OCG grammar needs work. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 weird ass spirit monster doesnt return to the hand? i suggest you dont make it a spirit monster XD, but i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Thanks man, but, how do I fix the grammar, how should I put it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Sry for the double post, but it's not a spirit anymore ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 errr? your askign me for grammar... Bloodrun call! Once per turn, you may remove this card from the Graveyard from play or return this card to the Graveyard if its been removed from play. As long as this card is in your Graveyard, all cards sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. As long as this card is removed from play, all cards that are removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. try that XD Just to tell you that.. Removing from play aint an area or a zone XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 yeah thats better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I have fixed the grammar, thanks alot GAK for he help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 This effect even has me at a loss. I would say something like: Once per turn, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects: - Remove from play this card in your Graveyard. - Send this removed from play card to your Graveyard. While this card is in your Graveyard, all cards sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. While this card is removed from play, all cards that are removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. I dunno. This effect is rather difficult to word properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Wow, since when do you venture into this section Kaze ^_^ And i like Kaze's effect too. Darn you yankee ya have to choose a confuzzling effect ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Thanks Kaze, I had a tough time with it, and apparently, everybody has different versions. XDThanks alot for posting Kaze! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 No problem. I've been away from my Realistic Card section for too long, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Glad your back, kind of, dang, now your gonna post cards, and blow mine away! Anyway, nice to have you back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Once per turn, you may remove this card [b]in[/b] the Graveyard from play or return this card from the [b]Removed From Play Zone to the Graveyard[/b]. As long as this card is in your Graveyard, all cards sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. As long as this card is removed from play, all cards that are removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. 8/10 without the OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Ok, thanks. I will chek the grammar out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Once per turn' date=' you may remove this card [b']in[/b] the Graveyard from play or return this card from the Removed From Play Zone to the Graveyard. As long as this card is in your Graveyard, all cards sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. As long as this card is removed from play, all cards that are removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. 8/10 without the OCG errors there is no zone for removed from play thats y its called RFP XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Once per turn' date=' you may remove this card [b']in[/b] the Graveyard from play or return this card from the Removed From Play Zone to the Graveyard. As long as this card is in your Graveyard, all cards sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. As long as this card is removed from play, all cards that are removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. 8/10 without the OCG errors there is no zone for removed from play thats y its called RFP XDyeah, but ever since they made D.D. cards...http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_Play_Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Oh! This is important, make it a level 4 monster. I forgot about rescue cat. With its effect, you get two of these guys and they are sent to the Graveyard at the end of turn. Wait... what happens when you have one in your Graveyard and one removed from play? An endless cycle that results in destroyed monsters going nowhere! XD XD XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Oh! This is important' date=' make it a level 4 monster. I forgot about rescue cat. With its effect, you get two of these guys and they are sent to the Graveyard at the end of turn. Wait... what happens when you have one in your Graveyard and one removed from play? An endless cycle that results in destroyed monsters going nowhere! XD XD XD[/quote']http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Infinite_Loop Instant Limited status.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 lol, I know that Kaze wiht the loop, I wanted people to go, "WTF?" It is funny XDI ued your effect, and I just refresed, and now I gotta edit AGAIN! >_< I gotta chnage the level >_< lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I have made it LV 4 now ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 nice card.10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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