Chargerfan Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 this is the army card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 ok not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seligsalt Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Horrible OCG and overpowered.... 50 ATK???? Not Much.... 8/15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seligsalt Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 hmmm....just a few errors left......... heres the redone effect Army-Survivor******[Warrior / Effect]This card's ATK is increased by 50 for every card with the word "Army" in its name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Well, it is really basic. Not alot after that, maybe make it increase by 100? 50 is way low =/6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 not bad, but only 50, man that's too low if I do say so myself, otherwise pretty good 8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 ok. should be a zombie type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e-hero sparky Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 average 4/10 improve me next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Increased by 50???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 ok. should be a zombie type. it is a survivor so i did not die it survived not a zombie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 or, it survises by being a zombie......Anyway, please work on this man =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Pretty bad OCG man, not the best of efforts, still this idea 'could' have a whole lot of potetial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 well, there are a few errors in the effect but its an okay card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Am i the only one who noticed that he spelt increased wrong? i mean, what is increaed? the OCG is horrible and its a little plain 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 It has some bad OCG. For instance, saying that it gains 50 ATK for every "Soldier" means it gains 50 ATK for every type of Soldier monster created. You should revise it and make it less powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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