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MY NEW CARD!!!


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My new card, tell me what you think:

 

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Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 800 for every monster on your side of the field. Using this card's effect, you can offer 1 monster on your side of the field as a Tribute to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Well whadya think???

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The pic is okay, and fits the name.

Now, I think its first effect is a bit too powerful, as it could go to 4000 ATK with a full Monster Zone. I'd put some sort of limit on its maximum ATK, or tone down the ATK gain a bit. Also, change "every" to "each" and "on your side of the field" to "you control".

The second effect uses some old OCG ("offer 1 monster as a Tribute") ("your opponent's side of the field"), and it isn't specified when you can activate the effect. I would put,

"Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 montser your opponent controls."

 

Overall, I'd say it's a good card. A bit overpowered, and a bit of old OCG, but good.

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My new card, tell me what you think:

 

217615.jpg

 

Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 800 for every monster on your side of the field. Using this card's effect, you can offer 1 monster on your side of the field as a Tribute to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Well whadya think???

 

Pretty nice, and I would personally use it, though it's effective range as a star level 5 means it would have to be the 4th monster on the field in order to actually be an okay card. I think maybe reduce it to 3 or 4 stars and specify the effect as only gaining ATK and DEF for face-up Warrior monsters on the field.

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Effect is good... PIC is decent... OCG needs a small fix...

 

"Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 800 for every monster on your side of the field. You can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Overall > 9/10 it's kinda balanced

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