zombie army

[Six Samz 500]

Please rate this is my first set. :lol:

its not that big.

hope you like it.

 

When this card is summoned you may add 1 trap from your opponents graveyard to your hand. This card gains 100 attack for each zombie on the feild.

 

This card may attack your opponents life points directly.

 

When this card is destroyed as aresult of battle you can special summon it in your next standby phase.

 

Once per turn you may discard 1 spell or trap card from your hand to special summon 1 level 4 or lower zombie type monster from deck.

 

Once per turn you remove from play 1 face up Zombie monster you control to special summon 1 level 4 or lower zombie from your graveyard.

 

Reality Time Wolf From The Grave+ 1 non tuner zombie type monster.

This card cannot be special summoned except by synchro summon. When this card is summoned you may special summon 1 zombie tuner and 1 level 4 or lower non tuner zombie monster from your graveyard. If you activate this effect this card cannot attack.

 

Special summon 1 Zombie type monster from your or your opponents Graveyard.

 

Select one monster you control any monster that battles it is atomaticly destroyed (without applying damage calculation).

 

When your opponent declares an attack you swap the target with one monster your opponent controls that monster then becomes the target. You regain control of the monster you gave to your opponent in the end phase and your opponent can not use your monster to attack.

[shaka1]

evil cave dweller has very bad ocg otherwise very good 7.5/10 :) 8) :? :x :shock:

[Six Samz 500]

evil cave dweller has very bad ocg otherwise very good 7.5/10 :) 8) :? :x :shock:

 

 

yea i noticed and changed the text below to what it should be :)

[Card Board Box]

I might as well help you fix your OCG...

 

* "ZOMBIE type" should be "Zombie-Type". The only time you will use full CAPS is when you're talking about the attribute (Example: WATER, or FIRE).

* "Special summon" should be "Special Summon" (This also applies with "Normal Summon" or "Set".)

* "end phase" should be "End Phase" (This also applies to all other Phases, such as "Battle Phase")

* "level" should be "Level"

* Please look up a Synchro monster. 'Cause on "Dark Wolf King" you got the Tuner part wrong.

* "graveyard" should be "Graveyard"

* "spell or trap card" should be "Spell or Trap Card"

* There is no such thing as a "Zombie Tuner-Type" (Don't use fake types). If it's a Effect monster, it's a Effect monster. If it's a Tuner, it's a Tuner (Look at Reality Time Wolf from the Grave).

* "feild" should be "field"

 

No offense, but the OCG is horrible. Some of the pictures need backrounds as well. "Allie Dog Fight" is very OP'ed for a Continous Trap Card.

[Six Samz 500]

I might as well help you fix your OCG...

 

* "ZOMBIE type" should be "Zombie-Type". The only time you will use full CAPS is when you're talking about the attribute (Example: WATER, or FIRE).

* "Special summon" should be "Special Summon" (This also applies with "Normal Summon" or "Set".)

* "end phase" should be "End Phase" (This also applies to all other Phases, such as "Battle Phase")

* "level" should be "Level"

* Please look up a Synchro monster. 'Cause on "Dark Wolf King" you got the Tuner part wrong.

* "graveyard" should be "Graveyard"

* "spell or trap card" should be "Spell or Trap Card"

* There is no such thing as a "Zombie Tuner-Type" (Don't use fake types). If it's a Effect monster, it's a Effect monster. If it's a Tuner, it's a Tuner (Look at Reality Time Wolf from the Grave).

* "feild" should be "field"

 

No offense, but the OCG is horrible. Some of the pictures need backrounds as well. "Allie Dog Fight" is very OP'ed for a Continous Trap Card.

 

as i said first set later 1s have got better ocg like the pokemon and rayquaza cards that are up at the minuete

[Six Samz 500]

bump

[jacy]

evil cave dweller has very bad ocg otherwise very good 7/10

[Six Samz 500]

[quote name='jacy' timestamp='1290980268' post='4816953']
evil cave dweller has very bad ocg otherwise very good 7/10
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read the lore not the card i know its wrong