Bahamut

[Lightning]

check out my new Bahamut series

 

 

tell me what you think

 

I"ve edited the mistakes but I don't know if I got all of them

 

I"ve made a magic card just for Bahamut tell me what you think

 

[LiAM]

You could have made them Effect monsters...

 

They also have really high ATK's...

[♣Master of the Dead♣]

Not good dude, not good.

 

You should go look around and look at cards to help your ocg and get help from pros.

 

But anyways, 4/10.

[Lightning]

TO Master of the dead

I'm sorry it's just Bahamut is really powerful so I always figured he should have high attack strength if he was ever a Yu-Gi-Oh card

[LiAM]

Well here's a few things to fix up;

 

Change them to Effect monsters.

 

Make them more balanced, you can have high ATK's, as long as you put a cost or limit on something.

 

Fix up your OCG (Official Card Grammar), they just don't look or read legit.

 

I can only really congratulate you on the fact you didn't make it a 12 Star thing.

[Lightning]

To Liam

Alright I can fix the majority of that stuff but I don't really know what you mean by grammar

[LiAM]

Official Card Grammar.

Example.

 

Wrong:

this card destroys a monster when its summoned to your side of the field.

 

Right:

When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster.

[Lightning]

To Liam

Got it thanks

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Dreadful for multiple reasons:

 

1 - Make them effect monsters with the reddish background.

 

2 - If they are going to be Level monsters give them a level up condition. i.e. when such and such a condition is met, tribute this card to Special Summon 1 'Neo Bahamut' from your hand or deck. Or have them evolve through the use of a special Spell card, be it Level Up! or something FF7 related.

 

3 - Ludicrously over powered stats and effects. As stated previous need costs or limitations of some description. Also, the effects don't fit the monsters.

 

4 - Grammar; word order, capitalization, punctuation, bullet points, and just use of language need work

 

5 - There has to be a better pic of Neo Bahamut somewhere.

 

For example Bahamut ZERO might read:

 

'This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 'Neo Bahamut' on your side of the field. Once per turn during your Battle Phase, you can pay 2000 Life Points to activate one of the following effects;

• Halve this cards ATK to allow this card to attack directly.
  
• Destroy 1 Fusion Monster on the field.'
  

 

Think you could be best served looking around the forum at other peoples cards and seeing how they do them. I am being harsh but as you can probably guess from my username I love Bahamut and it has ticked me off to see these. One thing I will praise you for is your excellent avatar pic.

[Lightning]

To Matt Bahamut

Thanks for your input I"m new here so it's not like I'm an expert at this but thank you for compleminting on my avatar

[krazyxgamer]

they have potential in being good cards.... but your a new person, i would suggest u just look around... some ppl are pretty rude on here so they will talk a lot of crap lol

look around, learn the OCG, see how ppl do them, since your in Pop Culture, you can make fake types, unique effects, and stuff like that, just find good pics, make them balanced, and have good OCG and not a lot of ppl will complain about fake types or stuff like that lol

you will learn OCG as you go, i was so bad with OCG when i started here lol

i'm not THAT bad now

 

idk if i should be saying this kinda stuff since my cards barely get any views lol...

[Lightning]

krazyxgamer

I'm trying my best