Dragoon55 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 first card needs some OCG second card has a nice description the fusion is pretty good, the opponent will think twice before attacking or puting a monster in atk position. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 I edited the first one now! i saw that last second too lol. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Not that bad first one's effect fix'd is: When a monster you control is sent to that graveyard as a result of battle, during your next Battle Phase this card can attack your opponent directly. I hope that works, though I do think I messed up with that :P rate: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Not that bad first one's effect fix'd is: When a monster you control is sent to that graveyard as a result of battle, during your next Battle Phase this card can attack your opponent directly. I hope that works, though I do think I messed up with that :P Thanks this will work a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 1st Card: OCG fix: "When a monster you control is destroyed by battle, this card can attack your opponent directly."Pic is somewhat squished but good. And I would raise its ATK to 1400 to make it more usable. 2nd card: I'm not found of its Flavor text. But I gues it's ok. 3rd card: OCG fix: "When a monster you control is destroyed by battle, remove 1 monster your opponent controls from play."It's pic has some borders, but besides that it's ok.It is quite ballanced and I would love to make a Deck around this. Total: A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 1st Card: OCG fix: "When a monster you control is destroyed by battle, this card can attack your opponent directly."Pic is somewhat squished but good. And I would raise its ATK to 1400 to make it more usable. 2nd card: I'm not found of its Flavor text. But I gues it's ok. 3rd card: OCG fix: "When a monster you control is destroyed by battle, remove 1 monster your opponent controls from play."It's pic has some borders, but besides that it's ok.It is quite ballanced and I would love to make a Deck around this. Total: A 8/10 Thanks im still new to card making as you can see. And it feels great to get higher ratings per attempt at making cards. Yay! And the reason why the attack is so low is because i don't want it to be too OP if multiple monsters are destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Well actually that doesn't matter. Its effect is written that it can attack if a monster is destroyed by battle. So it doesn't give it any more attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Well thanks again for the input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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