cro_carbon Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Here is My Own first booster pack, please comment and rate it: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 1) The Konami logo and the 300 Logo (which should say 150) are level, the Konami one should be higher.2) Road Warrior isn't large enough.3) Your tech circle needs alot of work. 4) Render of Road Warrior is poor.5) Glow should compliment booster and render colours, but doesn't. 6) Lack of sparkles.7) 1996 logo is too low.8) You haven't even bothered to edit the text layer...template obviously...which means the corresponding Japanese text below is missing too. 9) 5Ds logo should not have a red outline10) Ends/foil thingy hatching, is far too high at the bottom, and doesn't correspond to the background. It should be an overlap layer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cro_carbon Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Well, yes, it isn't perfect and I need a lot more to work on it but it is my first boostre and for first one is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Good for a first one, but there's simple flaws. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Actually quite bad for a first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 "Your text here". Man, people don't even TRY any more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cro_carbon Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 "Your text here". Man, people don't even TRY any more.It was an example text, Soon I will post new, better pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 It was an example text, Soon I will post new, better pack.Unless you're posting a template or showing something off it's useless. =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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