Lightning Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 This is my first Ritual card so they'res probably gonna be some mistakes but here it is and the magic card used to summon iteffect:This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Friendship Circle". This card gains 500 ATK for every face-up LIGHT Warrior-Type monster on the field. During each Standby Phase, place 1 Friendship Counter on this card (max. 5). When there are 5 Friendship Counter on this card, it can attack up to 5 times during each Battle Phase. I've always wanted to make this so tell me what you think EditMy bad did'nt see that Friendship Circle was missing a d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 OK, you wrote soldier in three different ways :D And you misspelled friendship lolAnyhow, this monster is really more creative, but your OCG is still quite sucky (no offense ^_^)You should work on that... a little more.Btw, the conditions you state in the Ritual Spell are odd. Ritual Spell Cards don't use such conditions, but I'm OK with inovation so it's all cool.Here is the correct OCG now. Try practicing it in order to remember it:This card is used to Ritual Summon "Friendship Soldier". You must also Tribute 2 Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monster from your field. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Friendship Circle". This card gains 500 ATK for every face-up LIGHT Warrior-Type monster on the field. During each Standby Phase, place 1 Friendship Counter on this card (max. 5). When there are 5 Friendship Counter on this card, it can attack up to 5 times during each Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Thanks so you really like my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 You're 16 and you can't spell friendship or soldier? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 To LiamI spelt friendship right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 In the Ritual Spell Card's name you missed the "d" and In the monster Soldier is incorrectly spelled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I saw that and fixed it sometimes I have to press hard on my keyboard to make a letter appear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I think that the Ritual Monster and its Ritual Spell Card are both fine, but you're once again overdoing it a bit on the whole Level and ATK/DEF. They don't need to be so high. The effect themselves are creative enough as it is. Try making some lower Level and lower ATK/DEF monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I will the Friendships soliders attack points was orginally gonna be 7000 but then I thought that would be really unfair so I reduced it to 3000 the strength of BLue eyes White Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Blue-Eyes White Dragon is a very old card. These days, most cards emphasize mid-2000 range ATK and less than 2000 DEF, with interesting effects. For this case, I would suggest that you made it a Level 6, with 1800 base ATK. DEF should be something like 1800 as well. Oh, and change the Ritual Spell Card accordingly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I wanted this card to be strong that's why I made the attack points like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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