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This is my first Ritual card so they'res probably gonna be some mistakes but here it is and the magic card used to summon it

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effect:This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Friendship Circle". This card gains 500 ATK for every face-up LIGHT Warrior-Type monster on the field. During each Standby Phase, place 1 Friendship Counter on this card (max. 5). When there are 5 Friendship Counter on this card, it can attack up to 5 times during each Battle Phase.

 

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I've always wanted to make this so tell me what you think

 

Edit

My bad did'nt see that Friendship Circle was missing a d

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OK, you wrote soldier in three different ways :D And you misspelled friendship lol

Anyhow, this monster is really more creative, but your OCG is still quite sucky (no offense ^_^)

You should work on that... a little more.

Btw, the conditions you state in the Ritual Spell are odd. Ritual Spell Cards don't use such conditions, but I'm OK with inovation so it's all cool.

Here is the correct OCG now. Try practicing it in order to remember it:

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Friendship Soldier". You must also Tribute 2 Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monster from your field.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Friendship Circle". This card gains 500 ATK for every face-up LIGHT Warrior-Type monster on the field. During each Standby Phase, place 1 Friendship Counter on this card (max. 5). When there are 5 Friendship Counter on this card, it can attack up to 5 times during each Battle Phase.

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I think that the Ritual Monster and its Ritual Spell Card are both fine, but you're once again overdoing it a bit on the whole Level and ATK/DEF.

 

They don't need to be so high. The effect themselves are creative enough as it is. Try making some lower Level and lower ATK/DEF monsters.

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Blue-Eyes White Dragon is a very old card. These days, most cards emphasize mid-2000 range ATK and less than 2000 DEF, with interesting effects.

 

For this case, I would suggest that you made it a Level 6, with 1800 base ATK. DEF should be something like 1800 as well.

 

Oh, and change the Ritual Spell Card accordingly.

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