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Np man, users like us are here to help out with newbies **Meaning your new not a n00b ;)*

 

 

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Now my critique on it::

 

I can see how it can be used, but OCG need work **Minor flaws I can help with**

 

OCG::

For each Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 400 ATK.

 

 

Tip: All words like this are fixed words.

 

By looks, it looks more like a Dragon-Type and not a Machine-Type, but if you think outside-the-box, it could be a Machine with a desing to look like a dragon and the engineers covered it with some kind of fire-proof suit that makes it look like an ordinary dragon, but it's a machine. **Imagination people, IMAGINATION!**

 

My rates: 9.1/10 **Nice job on your first**

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:D first card eva hope you like it, been playing yugioh for 9 yrs. now p.s. anyone now how to turn them to cards? :???:

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nice idea, but you have a dragon as your picture, which is not related to the card's effect in any way. Change the picture to something machine related, then it would be more well received.

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