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This is my first card made, I hope you like it...

Advice is appreciated

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Monster Cards from your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Arcane Token" (Dragon-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 0). This token cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects. If "Arcane Token" is the only monster you control, your opponent can attack you directly. This token is treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a Dragon-Type monster. For every "Arcane Token" in your Graveyard, all Dragon-Type monsters you control gain 200 DEF.

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The name does not suit the image. AT ALL :3

The effect is actually interesting, but it is cliche and overdone. You don't need to smack on an epic restrictive summoning condition. In fact, it would be better if there wasn't one. oh, and tokens do not go to the graveyard, when they are destroyed, they're destroyed. Like they never existed, kinda like going to the RFP area, without actually going there, so your effect makes NO sense :3 except for the tribute fodder part. But seriously, if it really was going to survive as a tribute fodder for 1 turn, 500 cannot be its ATK. Try something like, I don't know, 1500. I mean, you did take the time to bring out the dragon, so you might as well make the token something special. Oh, and there is so much dragon support these days that it's kinda broken. Red eyes darkness metal dragon completely destroys this card, so no one really is going to run this. Here's what I would have done.

 

Name: Toy Box Dragon

Level: ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

Attribute: EARTH

Type: Dragon / Effect

Effect: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon "Toy Box Tokens" (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) in all available Monster Card Zones on your side of the field. When you Summon a monster that requires a Tribute(s), you can treat 1 "Toy Box Token" up to 3 Trbiutes for the Summon.

 

 

That's what I would have done, but that's just me :3

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