Vyrath Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 This is my first card made, I hope you like it...Advice is appreciated This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Monster Cards from your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Arcane Token" (Dragon-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 0). This token cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects. If "Arcane Token" is the only monster you control, your opponent can attack you directly. This token is treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a Dragon-Type monster. For every "Arcane Token" in your Graveyard, all Dragon-Type monsters you control gain 200 DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 I like the art but the effect was kinda confusing @ 1st when I read it but then I understood it. It's pretty cool it's not uber powerful and has a cool effect that can help summon dragons like Blue-eyes white dragon easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Very good for your First card. THE OCG seems fine.. to me at least. Very nice picture.. good name.. decent effects. 8/10. ;] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 The name does not suit the image. AT ALL :3The effect is actually interesting, but it is cliche and overdone. You don't need to smack on an epic restrictive summoning condition. In fact, it would be better if there wasn't one. oh, and tokens do not go to the graveyard, when they are destroyed, they're destroyed. Like they never existed, kinda like going to the RFP area, without actually going there, so your effect makes NO sense :3 except for the tribute fodder part. But seriously, if it really was going to survive as a tribute fodder for 1 turn, 500 cannot be its ATK. Try something like, I don't know, 1500. I mean, you did take the time to bring out the dragon, so you might as well make the token something special. Oh, and there is so much dragon support these days that it's kinda broken. Red eyes darkness metal dragon completely destroys this card, so no one really is going to run this. Here's what I would have done. Name: Toy Box DragonLevel: ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆Attribute: EARTHType: Dragon / EffectEffect: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon "Toy Box Tokens" (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) in all available Monster Card Zones on your side of the field. When you Summon a monster that requires a Tribute(s), you can treat 1 "Toy Box Token" up to 3 Trbiutes for the Summon. That's what I would have done, but that's just me :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vyrath Posted August 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Yes, I wanted a name like Totem Dragon or Block Dragon, but couldn't think of a good one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hahalol Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 i got confused with the effect :unsure: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleu~Giovani Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 It's nice IMO. I agree with Essence. Good IMG and great OCG that I can see it. Rating: 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recteik Shade Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 nice first card not OPed, effect loojks good, no OCG errors. I like it way to go!!!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider25 Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 It is impossible to have a token in your graveyard but other than that good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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