Serenity the Candyman Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [spoiler=The Birth of Order] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9555/73464e.jpg[/img] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]] Effect:[b]Activate this card only while you control a face up "Light and Darkness Dragon". The activation of this card cannot be negated by Monster effects. Tribute 1 LIGHT or DARK monster you control and discard 1 Dragon-Type monster to restore "Light and Darkness Dragon" ATK back to 2800 and DEF back to 2400. [/b] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I really like Light and Darkness dragon. It normally renders four spells, traps, or monster effects useless and can bring out a successor when it's destroyed. The only problem with your card is that Light and Darkness can't be special summoned. Plus I think it will work better as a trap then a quick-play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I for got about that little effect. hold on.it is fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Alright. I look forward to seeing how you change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [b]This card can only be activated during your[/b] opponent's Battle Phase. Negate your opponent's attack and [b]discard 1 Dragon-type monster from your hand. If you activate this effect, you can add 1 "Light and Darkness Dragon from your Deck[/b] [s]and add it[/s] to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck. Or something like that. I like Light and Darkness Dragon too, but this really has nothing to do with it. Add something that has a similar effect to Light and Darkness Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1282240477' post='4543098'] Or something like that. I like Light and Darkness Dragon too, but this really has nothing to do with it. Add something that has a similar effect to Light and Darkness Dragon. [/quote] I like the card, but if you wanted it to have something to do with Light and Darkness, I would suggest restoring it's power. Something like that would really shake up an opponent. A light and darkness that negates 4 spells, traps, or monster effects, then is restored for some more negation would be extremely deadly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 perfect 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Bad... remember LaDD negates every card so this card would be negated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 [quote name='wero-vasto' timestamp='1282275163' post='4545291'] Bad... remember LaDD negates every card so this card would be negated [/quote] this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Forgot about that. Make it to where it isnt effected by LaDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 lolz yeah if you made it so it is not effected and had a better pic this card would be awesome so for now 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 fixed the effect? its getting there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nath~ Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Im giving it 7/10, the idea's great, but its Wording-Format seems messed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Wow, I really liked how it turned out. But don't forget to resotre it's defense to, otherwise it won't be able to negate anything else. You don't have to take my advice, but here's how I would word it. The Birth of Order: [i]Activate this card only while you control a face up "Light and Darkness Dragon". The activation of this card cannot be negetaed by Monster effects. Tribute 1 LIGHT or DARK monster you control and discard 1 Dragon-Type monster to restore "Light and Darkness Dragon" ATK back to 2800 and DEF back to 2400.[/i] My OCG isn't perfect, but how does this look to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 It looks ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 [quote name='guuu1234' timestamp='1282288187' post='4545768'] Wow, I really liked how it turned out. But don't forget to resotre it's defense to, otherwise it won't be able to negate anything else. You don't have to take my advice, but here's how I would word it. The Birth of Order: [i]Activate this card only while you control a face up "Light and Darkness Dragon". The activation of this card cannot be negetaed by Monster effects. Tribute 1 LIGHT or DARK monster you control and discard 1 Dragon-Type monster to restore "Light and Darkness Dragon" ATK back to 2800 and DEF back to 2400.[/i] My OCG isn't perfect, but how does this look to you. [/quote] i agree with this guy, the current effects states that you negate ladd after activating (but you still can't) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 and i agree with him as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 My only issues is that you spelled "Negated" wrong... Also the cost may pr may mnot be high or hard to pull of...but other thank that...its fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 thank you for your comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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