JEatsBabies Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/267/271546.jpg[/img] Pay 6000 life points. If you do not, negate the activation of this card and destroy it. Your opponent cannot activate the effects of Spell, Trap, or Monster effects nor summon or set a monster (including Special Summon). All card effects currently in play on your opponent’s side of the field, hand, or graveyard are negated. Destroy all cards on your opponent’s side of the field and discard all the cards in their hand to the graveyard. If your opponents life points are not reduced to 0 by the end phase of this turn, your opponent wins the duel. I did my best with OCG but just tell me about any mistakes and whatever else you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 lolz, i love this card. + rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 graveyard = Graveyard, end phase = End Phase. That's all i find, and I'm not an expert on OCG. 9.9-10 Cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossader Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Overkill card... "I activate 'Ultimate End' !!! i WILL win this duel !!! muahahahaha !!!!..." "Dude... i activate 'Waboku' " "O.o !!!! " Somewhat balanced... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 [quote name='crossader' timestamp='1282598587' post='4558203'] Overkill card... "I activate 'Ultimate End' !!! i WILL win this duel !!! muahahahaha !!!!..." "Dude... i activate 'Waboku' " "O.o !!!! " Somewhat balanced... 9/10 [/quote] WRONG! not everyone runs Waboku hence 2/10 for balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 [quote name='crossader' timestamp='1282598587' post='4558203'] Overkill card... "I activate 'Ultimate End' !!! i WILL win this duel !!! muahahahaha !!!!..." "Dude... i activate 'Waboku' " "O.o !!!! " Somewhat balanced... 9/10 [/quote] actually, your opponent CAN'T activate waboku due to this card's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 "[color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Pay 6000 life points. If you do not, negate the activation of this card and destroy it. Your opponent cannot activateo Spell, Trap Cards, Summon or Set a monster (including Special Summon). AllCcard effects currently in play on your opponent’s field, hand, or Graveyard are negated. Destroy all cards on your opponent’s field and discard all the cards in their hand to the graveyard. If your opponents life points are not reduced to 0 by the End Phase of this turn, your opponent wins the duel." [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]2/10 for balance.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 [quote name='Galadrien' timestamp='1282593925' post='4557979'] lolz, i love this card. + rep [/quote] [b][size="2"]Not rep worthy. Auto lose YAY! [color="#FF0000"]Ugh/10[/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 [quote name='.Ghost Rider' timestamp='1282600289' post='4558316'] [b][size="2"]Not rep worthy. Auto lose YAY! [color="#ff0000"]Ugh/10[/color][/size][/b] [/quote] i love this card cause of its craziness, not balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Armor Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 it ok, but a bit op'ed. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 This may sound link i'm flaming but I not, hopefully is you listen you will understand what I am saying. I commend the effort with the card and you are thinking allong the right lines but this card is monstrously overpowered, allow me to take you through it: Pay 6000 life points. If you do not, negate the activation of this card and destroy it. Your opponent cannot activate the effects of Spell, Trap, or Monster effects nor summon or set a monster (including Special Summon). All card effects currently in play on your opponent’s side of the field, hand, or graveyard are negated. Destroy all cards on your opponent’s side of the field and discard all the cards in their hand to the graveyard. If your opponents life points are not reduced to 0 by the end phase of this turn, your opponent wins the duel. - "Pay 6000 life points. If you do not, negate the activation of this card and destroy it." 6000 lifepoints may grab the attention as it is a monumental ammount of lifepoints, however in comparrison with what you will gain, it is simply not enough -"Your opponent cannot activate the effects of Spell, Trap, or Monster effects nor summon or set a monster (including Special Summon)." LOOK VERY CAREFULLY AT THIS SENTENCE. Effectively according the effect the player can't do anything now as he cannot summon or special summon. Not only this, but the player will not be able to play a magic or trap card as they cannot be activated. SO!!!! I ask you, if you can't play magics or traps nor set, summon or special summon a monster what on earth can a opposing player do after this card is used?????? -" All card effects currently in play on your opponent’s side of the field, hand, or graveyard are negated." This basically again makes the opponent even more powerless, as if there was a card on the field that has a chance of saving them it is deactivated, however by this point the opponent cant do anything anyway -" Destroy all cards on your opponent’s side of the field and discard all the cards in their hand to the graveyard." I actually think that this part of the effect is pointless as the player cant, ACTIVATE A MAGIC/TRAP CARD or SUMMON/SPECIAL SUMMON/SET A MONSTER therefore the cards in the player's hand are useless anyway becasue they cant be used, so this is pointless. -"If your opponents life points are not reduced to 0 by the end phase of this turn, your opponent wins the duel." This is your attempt at making the card ballanced, however it's useless becasue the opponent cant do anything, follow my logic through -Duel begins -Draw 5 cards each -Opponent goes first and sets 2 traps and a monster face-down -My move I use this card, my lifepoints are on 2000 and my opponent has no cards in his hand due to the cards effect -I use nobleman of crossout on the face down monster, I DONT attack becasue according to the terms of the card I will lose so I end my turn -Opponent draws, can't do anything, ends his turn, -My move I attack his lifepoints again -The pattern goes on like this until I win The problem is that although you have tried to ballance the card with this added effect, the card itself is so powerful that it doesn't make a difference. As I have said i'm sorry to have to do this but people must see how hideously overpowered this card is, but this fact is hidden due to the cost of 6000 lifepoints and the fact that you cant wipe them out on the turn you played the card. I would like a crack at fixing the card with you, so if you PM me we could do some work together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 I have just read the card again and realised that I have made a mistake I scratch everything that was said above. However I believe the OCG could be slightly better, here is an ammended version: "You must pay 6000 Life Points in order to activate this card. If your opponent's Life Points are not reduced to 0 before the End Phase of a turn this card was activated, your opponent can declare an automatic victory. When this card is activated, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field and your opponent must discard all cards in their hand to the Graveyard." With this version I removed the text which explained that you opponent can't summon as with no cards on the field or in your opponent's hand its null and void. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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