Exile Dragon, New exile set!!! Please comment (2 New trap cards added) My Best Set Yet!!!

[sabre]

[align=center]This is my newest card and i have tried to get all of the grammar corrrect but please tell me if there are any mistakes. Please comment and rate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Effect of "Exiled Warrior - Vapire Otarie"

When this Card is Special Summoned, Normal Summoned, or Flip Summoned Select 1 Monster on your opponent's side of the Field and Destroy that Monster. The ATK and DEF of this card become the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. When this card is destroyed the controler of this card takes damage equal to the ATK of this card when it was destroyed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wil hopefully be making a set out of this card so watch this space!!!![/align]

[Professor Cobra]

Good pic, a little overpowered. 8/10

[Junk Raver]

Even though i have seen this picture be4, its very well suited, so good choice ^_^

 

Its effect is very overused, far too many piercing monsters in the game

 

nethertheless, i like it ^_^

 

8/10

[sabre]

Thanks for the encouraging comments dj-osiris and prof. cobra. But i was really hoping for more people to comment on the cards!!!

[Junk Raver]

Well some people are boring lol

 

I myself find it best to give everyone comments, its sort of nicer that way ^_^

 

 

Some mistakes ^_^

 

Trap Card

 

cannot

 

Normal Summoned

 

can only be

 

dont cap hand

 

 

 

Again, used pictures, but i like your overall idea ^_^

 

8/10 again, if you correct the errors ^_^

[Yankee]

Good stff, but they have errors.

8/10

Good!

[Neospacian]

cool card

[Kizzi]

Really nice, you're awesome!

Except Cerberus can be overpowered at times...

^_^

[sabre]

thanks for all of your comments!! however watch this space as i may add more cards and i mite even write a fan fic to acompany this set!!!

[God Kaiba™]

8/10:D

9i'm not commenting):?

[sabre]

Thanks God Kaiba :D

[L33t Jenkins]

8/10 i like the pics

[sabre]

Thanks darkhearthero i think that these are some of my best cards mainly because of the cool pics :D

[sabre]

Thanks darkhearthero i think that these are some of my best cards mainly because of the cool pics :D

[L33t Jenkins]

no problem i like the first 1.

[L33t Jenkins]

no problem i like the first 1.

[Lucas Maximus]

wow, good work i like them all alot, i can see you have put great effort in to this and well i rate them 9.2/10 Really good job :D

[Lucas Maximus]

wow, good work i like them all alot, i can see you have put great effort in to this and well i rate them 9.2/10 Really good job :D

[sabre]

Darkhearthero: yeah that is my best one it is a great pic and effect!!

 

Luke thompson: Thanks i have put lots of effort into these and i will put just as much into the others for this set!

[sabre]

Darkhearthero: yeah that is my best one it is a great pic and effect!!

 

Luke thompson: Thanks i have put lots of effort into these and i will put just as much into the others for this set!

[Bloodrun]

wow i love the pictures

but hand does not need to be capitalized >_>

[Bloodrun]

wow i love the pictures

but hand does not need to be capitalized >_>

[cardffreak]

great pics

[cardffreak]

great pics

[RestLess-BoTics]

With a little more experience, you'll become an even better cardmaker. :)

Some errors, but I can see what you're trying to do here. Awesome job!