RestLess-BoTics Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 With a little more experience, you'll become an even better cardmaker. :)Some errors, but I can see what you're trying to do here. Awesome job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 The pictures are great-they all match seamlessly! The effects are a bit plain, but the Set itself is splendid! I like them quite a bit-so here's a lovely 9.3/10 from me. Just fix those nasty OCG errors and you're good to go. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 The pictures are great-they all match seamlessly! The effects are a bit plain, but the Set itself is splendid! I like them quite a bit-so here's a lovely 9.3/10 from me. Just fix those nasty OCG errors and you're good to go. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Amaizing^_^10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Amaizing^_^10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
petqwe Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Make a full set and we will all love it.I think that Lord of the exiled is a bit too strong as a Level 1 monster.Look at Dreadmaster: it is Level 8! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
petqwe Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Make a full set and we will all love it.I think that Lord of the exiled is a bit too strong as a Level 1 monster.Look at Dreadmaster: it is Level 8! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Thanks for all the great comments. What do people think of my field spell, have i worded it right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Thanks for all the great comments. What do people think of my field spell, have i worded it right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 wow these have the greatest pics i have ever seen and exile dragon is my favorite but you have some grammar problems other than that great cards 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 wow these have the greatest pics i have ever seen and exile dragon is my favorite but you have some grammar problems other than that great cards 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Thanks harris, exile dragon is my favourite of my set too  EDIT: i have added 2 new traps "Hero behind bars" and "Exile Guardian "what do people think of it?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Thanks harris, exile dragon is my favourite of my set too  EDIT: i have added 2 new traps "Hero behind bars" and "Exile Guardian "what do people think of it?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pwner Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 good pics. 9/10 best cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pwner Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 good pics. 9/10 best cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 what do people think of "Hero behind bars" and "Exile Guardian" ?????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Dude, way cool!!! Awesome pics, 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 The Hero behind bars is awesome vey helpful and exile gaurdian is cool i rate the 2 new cards 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Thanks harris!!! Added exile squad - destruction formation and exile cage trap, is it balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 the cage trap is balanced but exile squad - destruction formation kinda isnt maybe add in you cant attack for that turn and it would be balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Awwright, my turn ^_^ I've seen high ratings, so I need to see if you can live up to the hype First thing I notice is amazing artwork. Truly magnificent stuff you got there ^_^ Because of the artwork, I'll add 3 extra points to the final score. There are minor OCG errors - I won't point them out =/ First card - Summoning conditions are nice, but we don't need any more piercers =/ That's what killed it... 2/10 Second - 2100 ATK?! No. Piercing again??? Overpowered, it's never going ot get targetted... 0/10 Third - Kinda like a DDWarrior that can pierce =/ ... Okay I s'pose... Nothing special though... 2/10 Fourth - Quite useless if it can't be summoned... 0/10 Fifth - This + Some strong one when your opponent has no monsters = at least 3900 damage... Don't like it much... 2 times? 1/10 Sixth - 1800 DEF wall that kills a card in hand? Broken. 0/10 Seventh - Can't be sp'd from your hand as that goes to grave... So basically, you remove your entire field from play, and you kill your hand? Not really worth it... But decent idea... 3/10 Next one - Gets under LVLimit and Gbind... And its ATK can skyrocket... Broken. 0/10 Ninth - I actually like this one. It's a good idea, although it could be considered unplayable... That brings this one down a bit... 5/10 Tenth - SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO OVERBROKEN. It's got 2500 ATK at lv 6 that draws you 3 cards. It's not gonna die by battle... 0/10 Eleventh - I dunno about this one... It could potentially kill a BEWD and then be a BEWD, and not die... Could be broken... I'd have to do a full review... 2/10 for now =/ Twelfth - 2300 ATK on a continuous trap? There's not enough cards that kill 'em... Great in a Uria deck, but you need to lower the ATK... It's kinda broke right now... 1/10 Thirteenth - 800 forever?! Overpowered. Great idea though... Makes me wanna steal it xP Lower the stat boost or make it only for the turn... 5/10 Fourteenth - Great idea. No errors, but not super original =/ 7/10 Fifteenth - It's okay, but it really saves your ass with a lot of cards... No one really runs fields, so it's there forever... =/ 6/10 Sixteenth - FANTASTIC CARD!!! THIS IS WHAT WE'RE LOOKING FOR!!! Though it doesn't really have anything to do with Exiles... Try something like "If there are no Exile monsters on your side of the field, this card is destroyed." 8/10. Great effect. Don't be surprised to see a full review of this card.  Seventeenth - Mehh... Nothing super special... 4/10 Lastly, 18th - Doesn't really counter anything =/ 3/10 Overall: 2.7/10 (49/180) + 3 5.7/10 Great start, it's a nice set ^_^ Basically, you own where I fail [spells/Traps] but your monsters could use a bit of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 good cards 10/10the best is probely exile warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 thanks for all the help!!!!bhim xD: i agree with you i am not that good at making monsters but i am hopefully gonna make a set soon which relies on 1 or 2 monsters but mostly spell and traps as i think i am much better and them than monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clxmj Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 awesome cards you got there.. nice graphics too. Well done indeed. (Curious as to where you got em tho..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 thanks Clxmj but i cant tell you were i got the pics (its a secret) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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