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Dark Necro Magician/Nightmare Magician

Archwing

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Archwing

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Well i was makeing this card for a big Dark Magician Collab thingy but its against the rules so ill just post this as a single, it was part of a group but whatever. I dont like the name so feel free to suggest a better one. And dont forget to rate.
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[img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/736/121928v.jpg[/img]
Lore:This cards name is treated as Dark Magician while face-up on the field or in the graveyard.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 "Dark Magician" and 1 Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points for every Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard.

Im not crazy bout the effect either. So please feel free to suggest stuff.
The card feels a bit bland to me but a bland card every now and then is okay, Right?
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[img]http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/4674/121928h.jpg[/img]
Lore:This cards name is treated as Dark Magician while face-up on the field or in the graveyard. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 "Dark Magician" and 1 Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 points for every Spell card in your Graveyard. During your Main Phase you can discard 1 Spell card from your hand to inflict 300 points of damage to your opponents lifepoints.

Yah i suck at OCG so feel free to fix it for me :3
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Nightmare Moon

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Hmmmmm... interesting picture, Archwing. It deffinately looks like Dark Magician. ^^

Here are some corrections for your effect:
This card[b]'[/b]s name is treated as "Dark Magician".This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by [b]removing[/b] 1 "Dark Magician" and 1 Zombie-Type monster [b]in[/b] your Graveyard [b]from play[/b]. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points for every Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard.

Other than that, pretty good. 9/10
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[quote name='Grand_Hokage_Tsunade' timestamp='1283017243' post='4575223']
Hmmmmm... interesting picture, Archwing. It deffinately looks like Dark Magician. ^^

Here are some corrections for your effect:
This card[b]'[/b]s name is treated as "Dark Magician".This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by [b]removing[/b] 1 "Dark Magician" and 1 Zombie-Type monster [b]in[/b] your Graveyard [b]from play[/b]. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points for every Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard.

Other than that, pretty good. 9/10
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Archwing Newbie

Archwing

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[quote]It is a bit bland, but it definitely has potential.

That is one freakin awesome pic tbh
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Thanks, I want to fix it but the card makers being fussy right now...
And im actually thinking about makeing a image archive, im just not sure if it would be worth it...
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Archwing Newbie

Archwing

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[quote]The pic is just epic...where did you find the pic. dA?

Needs some ocg fixes, but effect is good.

Name suggestion
-> Dark Overmagician ?
-> Dark Nightmare Magician ?
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Nope, i dont go on dA, Ever... I use a bunch of diffrent sites. none that normal people use >_>
Yah im tryin to fix the OCG but the card maker wont let me.... Mabey if i refresh it...
Ill think about the names. Dark Nightmare magician sounds good....
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Well... first of all... change the first effect to be only while it's face-up on the field... if not it would be useless...
for the effect, is Dark Magician so I don't see why it should increase it's ATK for each Zombie (remember Buster Blader?) you should make it around Spell Cards
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Archwing Newbie

Archwing

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[quote]Well... first of all... change the first effect to be only while it's face-up on the field... if not it would be useless...
for the effect, is Dark Magician so I don't see why it should increase it's ATK for each Zombie (remember Buster Blader?) you should make it around Spell Cards
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I wasnt sure what i wanted to do with the effect. Make him some Necromancer thing or a darker dark magician....
I thought about makeing the effect around spell cards and changeing the zombie stuff to spellcaster or DARK monster....Ill change it as soon and the damn card maker lets me...

I put an alternate version up now....Probably messed the OCG up on that one too.
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Archwing Newbie

Archwing

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[quote]'This card's name is treated as "Dark Magician".' that's killing the card change while it's on the field only >_<

and make it 1 Spellcaster-Type monster, not 3 Spell Cards :/
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But if i change it to only on the field then Dark magician girl wont get a boost when hes in the graveyard :/
I guess i could change the 3 spell thing for a spellcaster
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Duplicitous

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[color="#000000"][b]Awesome Picture![/b][/color][color="#000000"][b]Some OCG errors[/b][/color]

[color="#000000"][b][u]Final Rating[/u][/b][/color]

[color="#000000"][b]9.7/10[/b][/color]

[color="#000000"][b]Good Work![/b][/color]

[color="#000000"][b]Edit:You got +1 Rep from me![/b][/color]
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