noroto320 Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 here is my new card i made its the 4th egiption god lol [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/9707/272801.jpg[/img] pwnz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 A fusion must have requirements, this has none. OCG Fix: (how cards are supposed to be worded) Once per turn, inflict 100 damage to your Life Points. Why would you do that? Capitalize Doomlight and Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 The ATK and DEF is way too high....but since it's a divine, I guess that's alright.... You have lots of OCG errors (common sense, capitalize the 1st word of a sentence). So much, that I don't even get your effect... I don't think you fully understand what fusion monsters are......,go google it. Nice picture but it's been overused. Okay/bad name. Overall, this card is hardly okay for starers.....you should try abit more ! I'm gonna give this card a 3/10....try again! Your card have officially been rated by -Athena- P.S-I notice most beginning card makers make "powerful" cards. Here’s an advice fro your: don't be one of them. If you want to make a powerful card, make it balance and creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiL`Tay Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 1 Tuner + 1 or more non tuner monsters When this card is summoned, remove from play all cards in your opponet's hand and graveyard. If this card gets attacked, deal doubble the damage that would have redouced your life points to your opponet. This card can not be destroyed my spell,trap, or monster effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Anny damage delt to this card is turned to 0. This card gains 1000 points for each card on the feild. When a card is removed form the feild deal damage equal to the amount of attack points gained by this card to your opponet. You can special summon this card, If you do this cards can't gain anny attack points. When it's your oppents draw phase, deal damege to your opponet equal to the cards removed from play. [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/2ly0vwp.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i37.tinypic.com/24fi6mq.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i37.tinypic.com/egssgx.jpg[/IMG] How about a card like this? I Give Yours A 3/10 Too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 @Tay that is considered spam and could result in punishment. Don't do it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Gay pic, Gay name, Gay effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryohydra911 Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Definitely not the greatest card I've ever seen. Fusion requirements: 0/10. There are no Fusion monsters required for the Fusion Summon of this monster, which is a must in any case with a Fusion Monster. OCG errors: 2/10. There are too many OCG errors in the effect, making it hard to understand the effect. Capitalization, punctuation, and grammar are all missing an element, and then there is the specific way that cards are written. Effect: 1/10 The effect is not costly enough, and does not limit you in any way other than having lost 100 Life Points every turn, which really isn't much. Attack & Defense: 4/10 The attack and defense are low for the card's level, but is still way too powerful against just about every other card. Picture: 6/10 Fairly good picture, but it is overused a bit. Average Score: 2/10. Try again, and make your monster(s) weaker than that but more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 A lot of OCG errors. It is way over powered. And there has to be requirement for Fusion Monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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