Kodamλ Posted August 30, 2010 Report Share Posted August 30, 2010 [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4534/174111zp.jpg[/img] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/9708/174111d.jpg[/img] If it can This Card must Attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the Field Once each. [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/5660/174111v.jpg[/img] When this card is Destroyed by Battle, you may Special Summon a Deoxys monster from you Hand or Deck. The monster Special Summoned by this Effect cannot Attack. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/9174/174111.jpg[/img] This card can Attack twice in 1 Battle phase. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/5306/174111k.jpg[/img] Deoxys+Deoxys Speed form+Deoxys Attack form+Deoxys Defense form this card can attack directly if you have 5 or more cards in your hand. If you use this card's Effect, Battle damage to your opponent (including by this card's Effect) is Halved this Turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted August 30, 2010 Report Share Posted August 30, 2010 Rubbish, waste of time very very bad ocg and spelling useless pics no background effects dont make sense thats about it just try again and havent you posted these before on "mah pokemon" or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted August 30, 2010 Report Share Posted August 30, 2010 yeah he has posted this before and its still trash. yami said all there is to say. it's crap dude, actually re-do it and not just post it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodamλ Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 make it like a real card fool. this is complete and utter rubbish. 0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodamλ Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 My edit is complete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I like the overall idea but you do need to find new pics. The current ones are too blank. Also, you still need to fix the OCG on all the cards. Other than that, 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [quote name='BlackFire Dragon' timestamp='1283234561' post='4584144'] My edit is complete [/quote] Your ocg is still bad. Effects are still bland They aren't horrible anymore but they still aren't good. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodamλ Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ok new pics are in though I'm not very good at OCG so could you give me some tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 mostly you just capitalized too much. also i would lower their stats cause with 2700ATK for only 1 tribute is op'ed. once ocg is fixed (I'll let you try on your own first, then I'll help if you need it) It will be 5/10 Get all pics with no backgrounds, 6/10 Fix the stats, I'd say around 2500 or 2400 for the atk and def forms, I'll give the a 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ D. Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Id say try to change the effects, find better pics on deviantart or photobucket. I like the idea though just try to make it a little better then it would be great RATE:5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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