POKEMON cards please RATE

[TJ D.]

Here are starts in Pokemon cards im interested in making. Please give me any ides on where to go from with my cards and other things also like the OCG accuracy and such. Please and thank you .
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[b]LORE:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "#002 Ivysaur". While this card is face-up on your side of the field, all Plant-Type and Insect-Type monsters on your side of the field(not including this card) are unaffected by Magic and Trap cards. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300 for each monster on your side of the field. By Tributing a Plant-Type or Insect-Type monster, destory 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field.[/b]
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[b]LORE:If this card is attacks a WATER-type Monster raise its ATK by 300 but lower its DEF by 200. If this card is destroyed by a WATER-type monster, either by battle or by effect, this cards controller loses an additional 500 Life Points. You can Tribute this card during your Standby Phase to Special Summon "#006 Charizard" from your hand or Deck.[/b]

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[b]LORE:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "#005 Charmeleon". If this card battles a WATER monster, increase its ATK by 1000 and decrease its DEF by 900. If this card is destroyed by a WATER monster, either by battle or effect, the controller of this card loses an additional 1000 Life points.[/b]

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[b]LORE:If this card battles a FIRE monster, increase its ATK to 3000 until the End Phase. If this card is in Defense Position during the End Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand and draw 1 card. You can Tribute this card during your Standby Phase to Special Summon "#009 Blastoise".[/b]

[img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/487/275553.jpg[/img]
[b]LORE:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "#008 Wartortle". If this card battles a FIRE monster increase its ATK to 3500 until the End Phase. By discarding your entire hand, this card can attack an extra time.
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[b]LORE:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can place 1 Sleep Counter on this card (max. 5). If there is a Sleep Counter on this card, it cannot attack. Increase this cards DEF by 200 for each Sleep counter on it. You can remove 3 Sleep Counters from this card to discard 1 random card from you opponent's hand.[/b][/spoiler]

[Megaman91]

Well, for a W.I.P. is good made, but I recommend to use more incisive and better-made images. Also, the 'is attacks' in the Charmeleon effect is nonsense. However, the rest of the OCG is well made. All I can say is that this is a good work, but still requires work to give out all its potential.

[Time Psyduck]

Not bad, although the OCG needs some work.

Charmander's effect should say Tribute, not Sacrifice, but is otherwise fine

Charmeleon's effect should read:
[b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of #004 Charmander. If this card battles a WATER monster increase it's ATK by 300 and decrease it's DEF by 200. If this card is destroyed by a WATER monster, either through battle or by a card effect, this card's controller loses 1000 life points. During your Standby Phase, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon #006 Charizard from your Hand or Graveyard.[/b]

The effects themselves are mostly fine, although Charmeleon seems rather weak - it needs Charmander to be around at the start of your turn to get out, isn't impressive in terms of ATK, and inflicts quite serious damage if it's taken out by a water monster and a mediocre vanilla if there aren't any. Most mid-stage level monsters don't need the first stage to get them out, as you can tribute summon or use something like Monster Reborn. Also, most level monsters search from the deck, which makes the high-level monsters faster to get out, whereas it's far more difficult to get powerful cards in particular to your hand. Charmeleon's burn when destroyed should probably be lower, somewhere about 500, meaning Charizard can have a +800 or +1000 attack boost and +1000 burn.

[TJ D.]

THanks for the comments guys and I'll try to improve an CHarmeleon. after reading it i thought something was weird. THank you Megaman91 and Time Psyduck

*bump

[Shizuku Oikawa]

hand is lower-cased.
lol, I seen too many Pokemon sets, lol
I'll might as well get started on commenting on the cards
Charmander is pretty good and balanced.
the same for Charmeleon
Charizard is kinda meh
Too be honest the Charmander Series is kinda underpowered, but can also be useful, but Charmeleon and Charizard are underpowered considering that their major drawback is losing Life Points, in which it's good for Rainbow Life or Prime-Material Dragon, lol

[TJ D.]

[quote name='DHeroDogma' timestamp='1283384147' post='4590425']
hand is lower-cased.
lol, I seen too many Pokemon sets, lol
I'll might as well get started on commenting on the cards
Charmander is pretty good and balanced.
the same for Charmeleon
Charizard is kinda meh
Too be honest the Charmander Series is kinda underpowered, but can also be useful, but Charmeleon and Charizard are underpowered considering that their major drawback is losing Life Points, in which it's good for Rainbow Life or Prime-Material Dragon, lol
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Thank you for commenting and do you think you could check out Snorlax i just added it on the list =)

[Shizuku Oikawa]

lol, it just went from kinda underpowered to overpowered with Snorlax
He can easily discard cards at basically no cost, lol, so he is kinda overpowered.
The images are good though

[TJ D.]

[quote name='DHeroDogma' timestamp='1283384382' post='4590444']
lol, it just went from kinda underpowered to overpowered with Snorlax
He can easily discard cards at basically no cost, lol, so he is kinda overpowered.
The images are good though
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K thanks ill try to make them better. Thank you for helping me to get on a start from somewhere with the cards

[TJ D.]

*bump need comments please.

[TJ D.]

*bump

[Ren✧]

Pretty good.

[xmas]

Hehe like snorlax!