shadow124 Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/BeratchatheHiddenGlutton.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/BenzoTheHiddenFury.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/BaragaBladeofGloom.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/BairatheHiddenLunatic.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/BatDoctorShadowoftheUndeath.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/BazookaMutant.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/CursedPincher.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/DarkClown.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/DarkRavenShadowofGrief.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/DimensionSplitter.jpg[/img] [img]http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz222/shadow126/Yugioh%20Cardmaker/GamilKnightofHatred.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 hey! we both used the same pic for one of our cards! Your 5th card, the Bat doctor one. look: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/219912-necromancer-rising-set/ Anyway... It's not the greatest OCG I've ever seen. Don't shorten words! Don't ever use LP for Life Points. SPELL IT OUT. Also don't be afraid to use, "This monster" or "This card". Also it's not called a special ability, its an effect. So for Baraga Blade of Doom, it should be: "Tribute 500 Life Points to activate this monster's effect. You can destroy every [u][b]Spell[/b][/u] and Trap car on your opponents field." I'm sure everyone will agree that, THAT is correct OCG. Also you don't say "wins a battle" you say "destroys a monster" just work on your OCG also don't make a set without Spell or trap cards. btw: We don't call them Magic cards anymore. since the 8th booster pack they are called Spell Cards. I'm not trying to be mean, it's just good criticism. Take it in and learn from your mistakes. I'm sure with some practice you'll be making excellent cards 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Ocg errors but other than that good job 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BatMed Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 I will give for that 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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