John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 I realized I never made a vanilla with some long lore, so I made this. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5286/227682a.jpg[/img] [i]A man whose soul was condemned to forever be bound to the dark depths of Hell by long, painful chains, each and every link painfully filled with the gruesome memory of his miserable life. His life was all but pleasure, and now he has the most painful of punishments to scar him with his wrong-doings forever.[/i] Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Love the story, but other than that and the DEF, it is basically a carbon-copy of Summoned Skull. Nothing wrong with him, though. 10/7 (MWAHAHAHA! An even number out of an odd number! It will take you a full MINUTE to figure out what the percentage is! I'm so evil!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 10/7=142% Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 I love people who try and do vanillas as vanillas are MY speciality, I like your LORE it portrays a grusome picture, would you be offended though if I had a stab at trying to make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 this vanilla most certainly has a cherry *like* 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1283378221' post='4590029'] I love people who try and do vanillas as vanillas are MY speciality, I like your LORE it portrays a grusome picture, would you be offended though if I had a stab at trying to make it better? [/quote] Go for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [b]Very nice. Though, IMO you should make it Level 6. I really like the description and image. 9.3/10[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Thanks, and yeah, I can do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='δαίμονας' timestamp='1283379113' post='4590102'] Go for it. [/quote] OK here is what I did with your version you may use it if you want but i understand if you want to stick with your own. A man whose soul is condemned to an afterlife of perpetual torment. Diabolic chains, each with a painful link to the memories of his past, pierce his body, scarring him both physically and mentally. He hangs there even to this day suspended within the scorching fires of hell, he longs to go back to his life and undo his ill-fated acts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1283379600' post='4590143'] OK here is what I did with your version you may use it if you want but i understand if you want to stick with your own. A man whose soul is condemned to an afterlife of perpetual torment. Diabolic chains, each with a painful link to the memories of his past, pierce his body, scarring him both physically and mentally. He hangs there even to this day suspended within the scorching fires of hell, he longs to go back to his life and undo his ill-fated acts. [/quote] There's a problem with that. The chains aren't piercing him in the picture, they're wrapped around him. And I'm just gonna stick with my own [s]That way I can take all the credit![/s] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 The story kinda tell me that is a WEAK monster now :/ and before was a STRONG one :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='δαίμονας' timestamp='1283379697' post='4590155'] There's a problem with that. The chains aren't piercing him in the picture, they're wrapped around him. And I'm just gonna stick with my own [s]That way I can take all the credit![/s] [/quote] that's fair enough its a good effort though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 before you forget giev credit to Jazin Kay b4 someone notices Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 Did they just add the rule to give credit? Because the last time I checked the rules it said you didn't have to.[quote]Image credit is not required. If there is a copyright/trademark/etc. issue, moderators will deal with the issue accordingly. Please do not comment on a person's card saying they lack image credit.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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