Darkness Deck

[BatMed]

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[color="#9932CC"][size="5"][b]//Darkness Deck//[/b][/size][/color][/center]

[center]Monster[/center]
[img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/1262/258394.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/8733/258394u.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/1262/258394.jpg[/img]
Lore:
Once Per Turn you can select one monster from you opponent side and puts in it one weakness counter (Max. 1). Each time that Card with weakness counter destroy a monster result attack, Decrease his Attack Point by 500 Point. If a monster his attack Becomes 0 resutl the effect of this card, will be destroyed and you opponent take 500 damage point from his Life Point.
[img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/1262/258394.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/6756/258394g.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/1262/258394.jpg[/img]
Lore:
"1 Dark Tuner monster" + 1 or more Dark monsters
This monster gain 200 ATK point for each Dark Materiel Synchro Monsters you used to summen this card. Each Time this card is destroy a opponent monster result attack put one Abyss Counter (max. 4). By sacrefice 4 Abyss counter this card can attack you opponent Life Point Directely. If this card send tot he graveyard you can special summon from you hand one LV 5 or less monster.
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1262/258394.jpg[/img]
Lore:
If you use this monster to summon the Synchro monster "Swordsman of Dark Fate", you opponent take 600 point damage from his Life Point. Each time you opponent played a spell or Trap card move one coin, If was:
Head: Actevit the Card.
Star: Negate the effect and destroy the card.
[img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/621/258394a.jpg[/img]

[font="Comic Sans MS"][color="#FF0000"][size="5"][center]To be Continued......[/center][/size][/color][/font]

[Alex :D]

Lots of OCG errors.

[MortalKombatSmoke]

a few things:
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[*]NEVER use the word "points" after "ATK" or "DEF"
[*]if you want to inflict famage on your opponent, just say "Inflict 500 damage to your opponent"
[*]say "flip" a coin, not "move" a coin
[*]USE NORMAL GRAMMAR! U r saying things in your cards that don't fit. most of your words that aren't plural should be and a lot of other grammar mistakes. Spell check your cards.
[*]dont' say "By sacrifice"(I think u mean "By Sacrificing") say "Tribute"
[*]don't say "by attacking" say "By battle"
[*]"Life point[u][i][b]s[/b][/i][/u]" never EVER say "Life point" always "Life Point[u][i][b]s[/b][/i][/u]"
[*]there's a lot more...
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pics are good
horrible OCG
horrible basic grammar.
4/10, sorry you can't pass with just good card pics.

[shaka1]

sweet cards i cant beliieve ur a begginner check out my new cards/ zombie world and leave a comment but if u really like it then PM me