Batteryman set

[Giant Mushroom?]

Alright, this is my first time posting cards, and thier written, obviously, and i would like some pictures for them, so if you would help me out, that'd be great, my email is [email protected] or [email protected].

Battery Cap
LIGHT
Effect monster
Level 2 **
Thunder/union
400 ATK 200 DEF


[i]Once per turn, you may equip this card to 1 of your "Batteryman" Monsters OR unequip it and Special Summon this card in Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster, increase that monster's ATK by 1100. It is also treated as a Machine-type monster. [/i]

Umm i guess its for support.

Batteryman 6v
DARK
Synchro monster
Level 10 **********
Thunder/Effect
0 ATK 0 DEF

[i]1 Thunder-type Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-tuner "Batteryman" Monsters
This Card gain 1000 ATK and DEF for each "Batteryman" Monster you control. During each of your Stanby Phases, Tribute 1 "Batteryman" monster you control or Destroy this card. Once per turn, You may add 1 "Batteryman" monster to your hand from your Deck or Graveyard. [/i]

This is used for the OTK, by searching for Batteryman AA.

Battery Cell Charge
LIGHT
Effect Monster
Level 1 *
Thunder/Effect
100 ATK 100 DEF

[i] At anytime during your turn, you may change this card's type to Machine-type OR you may treat this card as a Tuner Monster. [/i]

Just a Tuner.

Energy Efficiancy
Continuous spell card

[i]Once per turn, you may add up to 2 "Batteryman" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If you do, you must pay 500 life points per card. Every Thunder-type monster gains 500 ATK OR gains 500 DEF. Decrease every monster's ATK by 500 unless the contoller discards 1 card from thier hand. (The controller must only discard 1 total card.)[/i]

Field support for any batteryman card.

Fix'd again

[Bringerofcake]

[quote name='Just dispicable' timestamp='1283555432' post='4596600']
Alright, this is my first time posting cards, and thier written, obviously, and i would like some pictures for them, so if you would help me out, that'd be great, my email is [email protected], (my secondary email) and if you cant send it ill give you my primary email...so here they are!

Battery Cap
LIGHT
Level 2 **
Thunder/Synchro/Union
400 ATK 200 DEF

[i]1 [s]Thunder-type Tuner Monster + 1 non-Tuner Machine-type monster.[/s]
Once per turn, you may equip this card to 1 of your "Batteryman" Monsters OR [b]unequip it and Special Summon this card in Attack Position.[/b] While this card is equipped to [b]a monster[/b], increase that monster's [s]DEF[/s] [b]ATK[/b] by 1100. It is [b]also treated as a Machine-type monster[/b]. [/i]

[b]It doesn't need to be a Synchro. And being Machine-type only makes C kinda runnable. There isn't much in the way of Batteryman stall, so I felt that an ATK increase would work better.[/b]


Batteryman 6v
DARK
Level 10 **********
Thunder/[b]Synchro[/b]/Effect
0 ATK 0 DEF

[i]1 Thunder-type Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner "Batteryman" monsters
This Card gain 1000 ATK and DEF for each "Batteryman" monster you control. During each [b]of your[/b] Standby Phases, Tribute 1 "Batteryman" monster you control or destroy this card. Once [s]during your[/s] [b]per[/b] turn, you may add 1 "Batteryman" monster from your Deck or Graveyard. [/i]

[b]So, a giant version of AA. Eh. Also, where does the searched Batteryman go?[/b]

Battery Cell Charge
LIGHT
Level 1 *
Thunder/Effect
100 ATK 100 DEF

[i]This Card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon except for the Synchro Summon of a "Batteryman" Monster. At anytime during your turn, you may change this card's type to Machine-type.[/i]

[b]This should be a Tuner. It would make your Synchro make sense. Plus you wouldn't have to run Wattfox or something and have to deal with weird Levels.[/b]

Energy Efficiency
Continuous spell card

[i]Once during your turn, you may remove from play up to 3 "Batteryman" monsters control. Remove from play the same number of cards your opponent controls. All cards but 1 (you get to choose) are returned to the field during the 2nd End Phase after they were removed from play. Once per turn, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Batteryman" Monster from your hand to the graveyard.[/i]

[b]By "all cards", I assume you mean what was removed from both sides of the field? And if the card dies, wouldn't the cards not come back? If so, broken.[/b]
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Enjoy commentary.

[Giant Mushroom?]

yea im not good at making cards...heheh.. im working on them though and cell charge is supposed to be a tuner, i donno how i posted that it wasnt >_>

[Bringerofcake]

Everyone needs practice.

[Andross88]

I really like this idea! Giving Batterymen a Synchro is epic! I do have some constructive criticism though.

You probably want to include the entirety of the Union effect on Battery Cap (destruction prevention, either by battle or blanket).

I think the Maintenance cost on the Synchro unnecessarily nerfs it.

Restricting the Tuner to 1 Synchro monster also seems unnecessary, since it doesn't do anything else, really.

Energy Efficiency is interesting, at least as worded. At first glance, a +2 every turn seems broken, but the last sentence is a bit ambiguous. Does the controller have to discard 1 card for each monster? Does it affect both players every Standby Phase? Finally, the ATK/DEF boost gain thing is weird. Just increase the ATK and decrease the DEF, or increase both, or whatever. Complicated does not equal better.