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Ok, I understand that you are fairly new here so I will help you.

1. Magic Rock - A little uninspired come up with a better name like "Stone of Agony" for instance
2. Too many Level Stars 10 is sufficient for a card with this effect
3. Stone - Stone is not a monster type, the type you are looking for is rock.
4. OCG (Official Card Grammar) - This is how your card should read:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 3 monsters your opponent controls as a Tribute. When this card is Special Summoned, it is placed on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position, its battle position cannot be changed and it cannot be offered as a Tribute for a Normal Summon. If this card exists in your Graveyard, it cannot be Special Summoned to the field except by offering 3 monsters your opponent controls as a Tribute.

5. Image - You need a good quality image with a background. Your best bet is Deviantart.com here is an example of a half-decent image you could use http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=stone&order=9&offset=144#/d92cvz

6. The effect itself in my oppinion is very overpowered, you may need to ballance it, however that is just my oppinion and it is your card

Hope this helps
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[quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1283799024' post='4607138']
Ok, I understand that you are fairly new here so I will help you.

1. Magic Rock - A little uninspired come up with a better name like "Stone of Agony" for instance
2. Too many Level Stars 10 is sufficient for a card with this effect
3. Stone - Stone is not a monster type, the type you are looking for is rock.
4. OCG (Official Card Grammar) - This is how your card should read:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 3 monsters your opponent controls as a Tribute. When this card is Special Summoned, it is placed on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position, its battle position cannot be changed and it cannot be offered as a Tribute for a Normal Summon. If this card exists in your Graveyard, it cannot be Special Summoned to the field except by offering 3 monsters your opponent controls as a Tribute.

5. Image - You need a good quality image with a background. Your best bet is Deviantart.com here is an example of a half-decent image you could use http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=stone&order=9&offset=144#/d92cvz

6. The effect itself in my oppinion is very overpowered, you may need to ballance it, however that is just my oppinion and it is your card

Hope this helps
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sure il change that soon

im not new P.S. I just got this card out of my made ones i made when i joined so i dont think il change it
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