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[b][size="2"]Spam Is Bad.
This card is generally Broken.
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[*]Broken Image
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[*]Broken OCG
[*]Broken Effect
[*]Broken Everything!
[/list]Please look ate other peoples cards and that should help you.[/size][/b]
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They can tell you bad all day, but you'll never learn a thing if you don't know how to fix it. I'll improve it for you this time since you're new. Please follow along.

Zackause- The Fire God: (Pyro/Effect) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. The original ATK and DEF of this card are each 500 x the number of FIRE monsters in your Graveyard.

Even with the effect I wrote out, though, it is still simple. Perhaps give it a burn effect with a suitable negative effect to balance it out.

Another thing you should do is post the effect underneath the card. That makes things easier for us to read and critique, especially with super long effects. For more help, read the posts about card OCG and go to yugioh.wikia.com and other YCM posts to see how real cards are made right.
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