Guest nwslap12 Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Great pics but i didnt have time to read the effects... sorry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 They are ok, but there are problems >_<6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 They are ok, but there are problems >_<6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Some grammar errors, but not too bad! If you need any help, or if you have any questions, feel free to private message me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Some grammar errors, but not too bad! If you need any help, or if you have any questions, feel free to private message me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 First one... Errors that make the card not make sense... "This card can be Normal Summoned with 3 Tributes. If this card is summoned in this manner, destroy all Spell and Trap cards..." Don't like it, and it doesn't have 3 heads either... 1/10 Second one: You can't Special Summon unless you have no monsters in the hand... But this is in your hand, so you can't SP. Summon it. Change that to "This card cannot be Sp.Sum'd if there are no other monsters in your hand..." You're right... It IS pretty basic... 4/10 OCG errors all over the place =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 First one... Errors that make the card not make sense... "This card can be Normal Summoned with 3 Tributes. If this card is summoned in this manner, destroy all Spell and Trap cards..." Don't like it, and it doesn't have 3 heads either... 1/10 Second one: You can't Special Summon unless you have no monsters in the hand... But this is in your hand, so you can't SP. Summon it. Change that to "This card cannot be Sp.Sum'd if there are no other monsters in your hand..." You're right... It IS pretty basic... 4/10 OCG errors all over the place =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 First one... Errors that make the card not make sense... "This card can be Normal Summoned with 3 Tributes. If this card is summoned in this manner' date=' destroy all Spell and Trap cards..." Don't like it, and it doesn't have 3 heads either... 1/10 Second one: You can't Special Summon unless you have no monsters in the hand... But this is in your hand, so you can't SP. Summon it. Change that to "This card cannot be Sp.Sum'd if there are no other monsters in your hand..." You're right... It IS pretty basic... 4/10 OCG errors all over the place =/[/quote'] i called the first card 3 faced not 3 headed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 First one... Errors that make the card not make sense... "This card can be Normal Summoned with 3 Tributes. If this card is summoned in this manner' date=' destroy all Spell and Trap cards..." Don't like it, and it doesn't have 3 heads either... 1/10 Second one: You can't Special Summon unless you have no monsters in the hand... But this is in your hand, so you can't SP. Summon it. Change that to "This card cannot be Sp.Sum'd if there are no other monsters in your hand..." You're right... It IS pretty basic... 4/10 OCG errors all over the place =/[/quote'] i called the first card 3 faced not 3 headed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 A little bit of OCG problems. The second card's first effect doesn't work at all because if he's in your hand, you have a monster in your hand and can't Special Summon him. And it doesn't say he can be summoned from the graveyard by that effect. Just look at some other card effects and make the changes :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 A little bit of OCG problems. The second card's first effect doesn't work at all because if he's in your hand, you have a monster in your hand and can't Special Summon him. And it doesn't say he can be summoned from the graveyard by that effect. Just look at some other card effects and make the changes :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 i won't bother changing it you knwo what i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 i won't bother changing it you knwo what i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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