gman22 Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 I was thinking, Yu gi oh is such a good show, so why don't we create our own season 6? carry it on? and make sure everyone gets a say on the episodes, I'll start us off, This set 2 months after the phorah Kaiba: Face it Yugi it's over, you have nothing to defend you, those god cards of your are finally mine, Blue eyes white dragon attack Yugi directly! Yugi: Not so fast Kaiba although I only have 100 life points remaining you forgot about my trap, activate! Magic cylinder which redirects the attack right back at you! Kaiba: what? No this isn't meant to happen, I had you so close! BOOOM! Yugi:100 Kaiba:0 Kaiba: NOOOO! Kaiba awakes from his nightmare, huffing and puffing out of breathe Kaiba: what? what was that dream? He returns to his sleep knowing that for the 14th time this month he dreamed of losing to yugi in a dream what could this mean? ................ Joey: Yugi you haven't played a single duel monster's match in 2 months, since the pharaoh left, snapp out of it! Yugi: I..I can't.. Tea: Yugi, your lucky you need to duel Yugi: Lucky, lucky, I'm a mess, I don't know who I am anymore, I don't even know If I want to duel anymore Tea: You've changed yugi, you've changed heavily, Yugi: The person I once was Tea is now gone..The pharaoh changed my life and now that he's gone, that Yugi has gone as well.. Joey grabs yugi's shirt and shouts at him furiously Joey: YOU'VE GOT TO SNAP OUT OF IT! Yugi sighs and walks off grimly looking down Tea: I'm worried about him Joey, I really am... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 This needs to be changed. Scripts aren't allowed and, to be brutally honest, your writing is quite bad. Plus the story doesn't make sense. If I remember rightly, Yugi isn't uber-depressed over the pharaoh after he's gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I actually think it is pretty cool....... I would improve on the plot though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 i agree with one idea, to create a new season of yu-gi-oh. however It could be a diliberated amongst the YCM community season, in which ideas are put forward and willing writers can contribute, sugggestion area Here ic ome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I think your too late on making an 6th Season on Yugioh, this is the [i]worst[/i] Fan Fic ever. Script Format is banned, like what GreatPriest had said, read the Fan Fic rules, at the bottum it will say that Fan Fic is banned. And, a dream that a person like Kaiba is always losing to Yugi is a Nightmare, plus, since it's Kaiba's dream he can change it with his mind. Everyone knows that after Yugi wins against Atem or Yami as I would say, Yugi becomes a better Duelist, worthy of keeping his title of KOG, so why would he be getting worse. I have also noticed that you have changed some of the characters personality, or is that just my mind. Gman, you should of stayed with writing that other Fan Fic, insted of wasting your time writing an [i]epic fail [/i] of an Fan Fic, now you should edit the entire Fan Fic and read our comments.....I guess that's all I should say except, this Fan Fic is very short btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 12, 2010 Report Share Posted September 12, 2010 Uuuuuuuuuhhhh.... it's not good. I can't really add anything to what's been said already other than it's an alright idea, just your scripting is utterly... not good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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